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Poems about the coastline

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Comment from royowen
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I guess a soldier would use sarcastic bitterness,but then it depends on the shape of the heart. Well done, I enjoyed this fictionally produced biographical account, written in prose recitation, it rang true for so many young Americans, on my trips to NY each year, I was reminded of the immigration of so many American when I gazed on Ellis Island from Battery point. Well done, written eloquent style, blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 27-May-2015


reply by the author on 27-May-2015
    Thank you Roy for this review. I am glad this piece of work resonated with you.
reply by royowen on 27-May-2015
    Most welcome
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
    Thanks