A Holiday in the Fall (Revived)
People remembering our heroes all through the year.26 total reviews
Comment from Tatarka2
This is a beautiful haiku, with such an important message, especially at this time of year. The picture is also perfect with it. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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This is a beautiful haiku, with such an important message, especially at this time of year. The picture is also perfect with it. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment as well as wishing me the best of luck in the contest.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Author I like your haiku,
good concrete message saying,
'Commemorate - all year long
people and events'
I agree
Gert
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Hello Author I like your haiku,
good concrete message saying,
'Commemorate - all year long
people and events'
I agree
Gert
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and the agreeable comment.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think this is a good message for this time of the year. Your message is simple and straightforward and that works perfectly for this poetry type. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I think this is a good message for this time of the year. Your message is simple and straightforward and that works perfectly for this poetry type. Excellent job.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and the comment about it being an excellent job.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a nicely written haiku. I like that you said we should celebrate and remember the true reason for the holidays.
Good job with the syllable count. No changes. Perfect picture.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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This is a nicely written haiku. I like that you said we should celebrate and remember the true reason for the holidays.
Good job with the syllable count. No changes. Perfect picture.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and the good review.
Comment from lancellot
I like this. I think the second line really hit the true mark. Some things should be celebrated or at least acknowledged all year long. Well said.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I like this. I think the second line really hit the true mark. Some things should be celebrated or at least acknowledged all year long. Well said.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you for your five stars and your comment of acknowledging people and events all year long
Comment from patcelaw
This pretty well explains what holidays are all about.
BTW the blue on the red is not at all easy to read unless I had highlighted it I would have not been able to read it at all. Patricia
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reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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This pretty well explains what holidays are all about.
BTW the blue on the red is not at all easy to read unless I had highlighted it I would have not been able to read it at all. Patricia
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Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and review. I made the font black.
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That is much better.
