Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Hush, Hush..."Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
45 total reviews
Comment from billscott
Fricken Sweet Write Dean!
Chilling and sinister don't come close to a perfect appraisal.
Seriously, now. I refuse entry into correctional facilities.
Pretty faces can mean a pretty quick trick and no treat.
I promise to keep my day job.
LOL.
Awesome write!
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Fricken Sweet Write Dean!
Chilling and sinister don't come close to a perfect appraisal.
Seriously, now. I refuse entry into correctional facilities.
Pretty faces can mean a pretty quick trick and no treat.
I promise to keep my day job.
LOL.
Awesome write!
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Hey, Bill. So sorry for the delayed reply, but you rock, buddy!
I got a little bit behind in my replies. I've been dong quite a bit of writing lately...
However, it in no way means that I don't appreciate your readership, your friendship, and your exceptional six star rating. That's very kind of you, my friend, and I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed it.
Take care, Bill...
~Dean
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Scary, creepy, breathtaking (in more ways than one). Always love your work, and am glad you are keeping up your short stories for your book. Are you getting a lot of submissions? You and your colleagues have a great imagination.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Scary, creepy, breathtaking (in more ways than one). Always love your work, and am glad you are keeping up your short stories for your book. Are you getting a lot of submissions? You and your colleagues have a great imagination.
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thanks for reading, Rhonda. As always, I appreciate your input. ~Dean
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OOOOhhh the best one yet.
Loved the feeling of tension as it builds to the end.
Loved the ending.
No peoblems noted.
Nicely done, master of the terror.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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OOOOhhh the best one yet.
Loved the feeling of tension as it builds to the end.
Loved the ending.
No peoblems noted.
Nicely done, master of the terror.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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Thanks for reading, Barb. I appreciate your review...
~Dean
Comment from JM
This woman is beyond crazy!!! She makes Lizzie B look like an amateur. That finger is ghastly. Your story is dark and as always you do a brilliant job at making me feel horrified.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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This woman is beyond crazy!!! She makes Lizzie B look like an amateur. That finger is ghastly. Your story is dark and as always you do a brilliant job at making me feel horrified.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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hah-hah! Yeah, she certainly is, JM...
Hey, sorry for the delayed reply, but you rock, my friend!
I got a bit behind in my replies. I've been dong quite a bit of writing lately...
However, it in no way means that I don't appreciate your readership, and your exceptional six star rating. That's very kind of you, and I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed it.
Take care, my friend. Have a super weekend! :)
~Dean
Comment from evilynne
Gruesome and nightmarish as always and well written, designed to foster nightmares. Finger et all, it is just bloody fun reading. Evi
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Gruesome and nightmarish as always and well written, designed to foster nightmares. Finger et all, it is just bloody fun reading. Evi
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Hey, sorry for the delayed reply on this one, Evi...
I got a little bit behind in my replies. I've been dong quite a bit of writing lately...
However, it in no way means that I don't appreciate your readership, your friendship, and your exceptional six star rating. That's very kind of you, and I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed it.
Take care, my Evi, and have a great weekend...
~Dean
Comment from LIJ Red
True tale:big pipe slipped in the chains, and they hauled Herman away to the
doc. Troy took his place, and as he prepared to start welding, he said, "What the hell're these?" and picked up Herman's fingertips....in the rug mill, 1971...
You do excellent horr'r sories...
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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True tale:big pipe slipped in the chains, and they hauled Herman away to the
doc. Troy took his place, and as he prepared to start welding, he said, "What the hell're these?" and picked up Herman's fingertips....in the rug mill, 1971...
You do excellent horr'r sories...
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thanks for giving this the once - over, Red. I really appreciate your comments.
Have a day, buddy. :)
~Dean
Comment from Spitfire
Nobody can write horror like you do. The dread begins at the start with brutal whispers demanding a kill. The lame excuse putting her at loose. An escape and a creepy discovery. (but I wonder how she got the tools to carve a hole in the wall?) Doesn't matter, because now, I'm hooked. The tension builds up all over again at the end. A six if I had any left.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Nobody can write horror like you do. The dread begins at the start with brutal whispers demanding a kill. The lame excuse putting her at loose. An escape and a creepy discovery. (but I wonder how she got the tools to carve a hole in the wall?) Doesn't matter, because now, I'm hooked. The tension builds up all over again at the end. A six if I had any left.
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Hey, sorry for the delayed reply, Shari.
I got a little bit behind in my replies. I've been dong quite a bit of writing lately...
However, it in no way means that I don't appreciate your readership, and your generous rating. That's very kind of you, and I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed enjoyed this Tiny Tale of Terror.
Take care, Spit...
~Dean
Comment from Ric Myworld
Human train of thought is unstable--dangerous--and can change in an instant. Love turns to hate. Lust to revenge. And that loving fatherly fellow's mind, snaps. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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Human train of thought is unstable--dangerous--and can change in an instant. Love turns to hate. Lust to revenge. And that loving fatherly fellow's mind, snaps. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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Thanks, Ric. Much obliged. ~Dean
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How do you sleep at night, Dean? Do you keep the light on? If I had your thoughts running amok in my head, I swear I would commit some terrifying deed. This one is another really horrifying tale. I used to have nightmares when I watched, "Tales from the Crypt" did you write those too? LOL. Brilliant as usual, my friend. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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How do you sleep at night, Dean? Do you keep the light on? If I had your thoughts running amok in my head, I swear I would commit some terrifying deed. This one is another really horrifying tale. I used to have nightmares when I watched, "Tales from the Crypt" did you write those too? LOL. Brilliant as usual, my friend. :) Sandra
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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Nope, but it was one of my favorite series on HBO. And I sleep just fine, as long as I have background noise (usually a horror movie playing on the bluray player, lol).
Thanks...~Dean
Comment from Drew Delaney
The voices whipsered - whispered
in an small drawstring bag - in a small
Scary stuff, Dean. Such horrid pictures, but I do see them when I read your work. Drew
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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The voices whipsered - whispered
in an small drawstring bag - in a small
Scary stuff, Dean. Such horrid pictures, but I do see them when I read your work. Drew
Comment Written 09-May-2015
reply by the author on 09-May-2015
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Thanks. Just one pic this time, Drew, at the end. The other is the story cover. Much obliged...~Dean
