Littoral
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Comment from danpald
Well the vision of the tides
That splash along the sands of time
Still there seems to be
One line that needs correcting:
"Their undulations dying with each plash,"
???"splash"???
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015
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Well the vision of the tides
That splash along the sands of time
Still there seems to be
One line that needs correcting:
"Their undulations dying with each plash,"
???"splash"???
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your review. Concise OED: "Plash poetic/literary n. 1. a splashing sound" Because of the onomatopeia inherant in the word I have always considered ''''''plash to be a much lighter event than the more violent splash, and therefore more appropriate here. I rest my case!
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Thank you for the information. Your case is settled in your favor.
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You're a gentleman, sir!