Comment from rama devi

Excellent

I had to read this twice, but I think I got it on the second read...is this implying that a gingerbread man can also be a gingerbread woman? Just teasing!

I like the coined word GENDERATION gap. Makes a clever satori-esque witty pun.

Good alliteration of the CH sounds in check and choice.

Good word economy.

Fine post, with apt artwork.

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thanks, rama. I wonder if the day will come when forms recognize different wiring.

reply by rama devi on 07-Apr-2015

:)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ha ha ha ha ...genderation gap...
I love this Shari....how about ...man woman confused?
Well done
Sad to coin a new word or that we need a new word coined..
God bless

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thanks for the great review, kiwi. The world is certainly changing. Normal may go out of style. LOL

Comment from joann r romei

Exceptional

hhhahahahha, how fun was this, and so fitting for the times, more and more young children are coming forward with this condition, i feel it is a cross mix up in their hormones, did you notice any of this when you were teaching?

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

I know I had one who confided in me--just the lesbian bit though. She ended up marrying a man however. Thanks for the exceptional review.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Well, you know where I stand on this issue. I check the brain...that's what determines the gender. Absolutely great work with this one. I think you did a terrific job with this and I just love the illustration too.

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

I believe it was your write on Ryland that got me thinking about this. I owe you.
Hugs,
Shari

reply by Sasha on 07-Apr-2015

That story touched me deeply and I am so pleased with the positive responses I got for it. I was worried about getting a lot of flack for it, but didn't.

Comment from catch22

Excellent

Hi Shari, you've penned a clever poem about gender identification issues and the often incommensurable views of the older generation with the younger ones on these issues. Good word economy and a biting social commentary.

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

I do hope the new generation is more informed than ours.