Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

This a great poem, I really liked the two sides, on hand feeling the pain of being stabbed in the back, and the other side of smiling untroubled at your foe,you have followed the prompt perfectly and this is a great entry. Good luck,
Andrew

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015

Thank you so much, Andrew, for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra x

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

You captured my attention from the start
for I can relate to your every word.
Believe me when I tell you very word is true.
Thank you for sharing from a broken heart.
Cookie

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015

Hi misscookie, Thank you so much for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra x

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This poem makes a powerful statement about abusive relationships succinctly in few words. It is all the better for its brevity. How many times, I wonder, are those three words 'I feel fine' used to mask our true feelings?

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015

Thank you so much, Tony, for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

This sounds like the type of friend it's best to stay away from...or MURDER, Debs. ;-)

Excellent expression of au unreliable and even vicious 'friend' who doesn't understand the real meaning of the word, and how some people put up with it.

Good luck, and have a great weekend, Ray xx



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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015

Cheers Ray :) Thanks so much for your good luck wishes too! love, Debs x