Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

You are such a grand story teller! I have really enjoyed all of these creations.. and I fear I will miss Luke and Lilly and Joe D'pring, and all the happenings of the kingdom Lore! You created a magical masterpiece, you did, and I enjoyed it all..me, the lady who never thought she would go for fantasy like this!

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thank you, Dawny. I consider this a wonderful compliment--to interest you in the story enough so that you enjoy reading about the characters, especially since it is not your favorite genre. I like "magical masterpiece" and am thrilled you enjoyed it.

Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

this was amazing, not only because the story was so compelling, but also due to your adherence of the form. the is a lovely fable that could be read to older children, and hopefully around a bonfire. Thanks! Caroline

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thank you for the excellent review Zinnia. I was writing it for my niece so I hope she finds the story compelling too. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi