Color-Bind
A rogue poem of sorts53 total reviews
Comment from chasennov
A rogue poem of sorts "Color-Bind" This Romance poetry you have created here is well written, well structured, and well formulated. Well done.
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A rogue poem of sorts "Color-Bind" This Romance poetry you have created here is well written, well structured, and well formulated. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, David. It is great to see a new post from you, my friend!
And you've returned with a vengeance, it would appear, LOL.
I liked the bouncy, limerick-like cadence of this.
Your poetic, rogue's apology features great rhyming, in a unique and interesting style, with inventively created quatrains.
Great meter, as per your usual work, and I love how it doesn't take itself too seriously...or, does it? :}
Good stuff!
~DeanO
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Hey, David. It is great to see a new post from you, my friend!
And you've returned with a vengeance, it would appear, LOL.
I liked the bouncy, limerick-like cadence of this.
Your poetic, rogue's apology features great rhyming, in a unique and interesting style, with inventively created quatrains.
Great meter, as per your usual work, and I love how it doesn't take itself too seriously...or, does it? :}
Good stuff!
~DeanO
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from mfowler
Oh,Marillion, it's so good to see you back. The gals have been gagging for you. Some, like Paulah60, have left the site to become a nun, out of sheer lack of poetic parry. Your poem shows that you haven't lost your iambic touch and your wit is on display as much, as ever it was before. Welcome back. the standard just went up two notches and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
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Oh,Marillion, it's so good to see you back. The gals have been gagging for you. Some, like Paulah60, have left the site to become a nun, out of sheer lack of poetic parry. Your poem shows that you haven't lost your iambic touch and your wit is on display as much, as ever it was before. Welcome back. the standard just went up two notches and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
Ohhh Rogue, so nice to see you back and to read your beautifully rhymed work. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
Adept always in summing up beautifully penned work: But you have sight in black and white, And I in only gray.
You did not disappoint on this one. Enjoyed thoroughly. AT=/
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Ohhh Rogue, so nice to see you back and to read your beautifully rhymed work. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
Adept always in summing up beautifully penned work: But you have sight in black and white, And I in only gray.
You did not disappoint on this one. Enjoyed thoroughly. AT=/
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from pipersfancy
I've been hoping to see something new on your page!
I've missed your exquisite rhyme and meter, the eloquent wording, the complex layers of meaning...
what went wrong with this one?!??
(kidding!)
Good to see you! Here's a 'sixer' as my welcome back gift!
Christina
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I've been hoping to see something new on your page!
I've missed your exquisite rhyme and meter, the eloquent wording, the complex layers of meaning...
what went wrong with this one?!??
(kidding!)
Good to see you! Here's a 'sixer' as my welcome back gift!
Christina
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
I got my 44 holstered, on safety, but it is ready pal should I see you around my house. Glad to see you and your precisely metered free-thing verses again. Kenny
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I got my 44 holstered, on safety, but it is ready pal should I see you around my house. Glad to see you and your precisely metered free-thing verses again. Kenny
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from JennaJaye
I've known a couple of 'shades of grey' men in my time--and gotten sorely burnt/burned. More fool me, ha, but live and learn. The irony with these guys is that, after the sting eases a little, they always manage to leave a touch of their essence with you, regardless, so that you can forgive from a safe distance. It's nice to be human, even if a trial. The thoughts in the final stanza sealed it beautifully. Excellent insightful poetry. JJ
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I've known a couple of 'shades of grey' men in my time--and gotten sorely burnt/burned. More fool me, ha, but live and learn. The irony with these guys is that, after the sting eases a little, they always manage to leave a touch of their essence with you, regardless, so that you can forgive from a safe distance. It's nice to be human, even if a trial. The thoughts in the final stanza sealed it beautifully. Excellent insightful poetry. JJ
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
Comment from mjac777
So you're the sociopath my mom warned me about ----lol
Actually, nicely written, the aa/ occasional rhyme/ scheme works well and keeps the poem moving at a lively pace. (like your love life?) lol
I liked the way you describe these poor girls as seeing in black and white - while your own moral metric is rather blurred and gray.
Oh well, who knew?
Very clever.
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So you're the sociopath my mom warned me about ----lol
Actually, nicely written, the aa/ occasional rhyme/ scheme works well and keeps the poem moving at a lively pace. (like your love life?) lol
I liked the way you describe these poor girls as seeing in black and white - while your own moral metric is rather blurred and gray.
Oh well, who knew?
Very clever.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
Comment from janalma
I was surprised to see your name here. Welcome back. Hope your dad's good, still. I got a kick out of this poem. The title really tickled me after I read the poem and got the connection. (I first read it as color-blind.) Liked the sound of the write and the way it rhymed. Liked the rogue's carefree attitude too. Lol.
You always make your poems sound so effortless, yet they always make sense (in a nonsensical way). And your wording is right on!
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I was surprised to see your name here. Welcome back. Hope your dad's good, still. I got a kick out of this poem. The title really tickled me after I read the poem and got the connection. (I first read it as color-blind.) Liked the sound of the write and the way it rhymed. Liked the rogue's carefree attitude too. Lol.
You always make your poems sound so effortless, yet they always make sense (in a nonsensical way). And your wording is right on!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
Comment from Ronni
Most intriguing and provocative 'rogue' reflection!
You 'tell it like it is' with no apologies and
no regrets, thus making it a candidly creative reality
and revelry. Lots of wisdom and truth to your musing..
liked or nor...it's real!
Thanks for sharing, best always, Ronni
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Most intriguing and provocative 'rogue' reflection!
You 'tell it like it is' with no apologies and
no regrets, thus making it a candidly creative reality
and revelry. Lots of wisdom and truth to your musing..
liked or nor...it's real!
Thanks for sharing, best always, Ronni
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014