Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Spitfire,

And you know, there is probably someone out there that has done just that very thing. What is the show, 'America's Most Dumbest Criminals' or something like that.

Great presentation.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

I remember that. I thought it was a feature in Readers' Digest though.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Love it! furniture stolen by thieves name written in dust. Just doesn't get any better than this when it comes to this style of writing. God Bless!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

What an enthusiastic review, Neon. Thanks so much.

Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

True, but Grace could have been framed. It also could be a religious message written by a fanatic. Or, it could have been a hippie requesting more grace in the world. Your poem got me thinking.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Ooh, I like your thinking. Could be a whole flash fiction story here.

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

This is cute and well written - what there is of it. One day soon, I'm going to try one of this kind of poem. It is a smart scene. Always trust in dust.

Always with respect,

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014

Trust in dust. Ha,ha. It keeps me sneezing. Achoo!
Shari