When the Sky Falls
100-word flash fiction21 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
What a surprise ending, sad, but I really thought it was a child. What a great story with the required main character, setting, conflict and resolution, Best of luck in the contest. Your entry is fantastic.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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What a surprise ending, sad, but I really thought it was a child. What a great story with the required main character, setting, conflict and resolution, Best of luck in the contest. Your entry is fantastic.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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I am pleased the ending caught you by surprise. Thank you for your fine praise and support.