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Domino 2
Excellent statements of positivity.
My favourite stanza is the 4th. Though I think it highly unlikely, it's a great thought.
Well written and presented.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
Thanks Ray for your excellent review, and great comments. The 4th stanza was inspired by Jungs. collective unconscious. Its possibly unlikely, but not impossible, I do believe there is power in the collective.