Play Me
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Comment from GracieAnn
jlsavell, this is a unique and creative write using a lovely metaphor of a musical instrument. The musical terminology is strong and consistent. The passion is well depicted with each line. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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jlsavell, this is a unique and creative write using a lovely metaphor of a musical instrument. The musical terminology is strong and consistent. The passion is well depicted with each line. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Gracie Anne, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! jls
Comment from granny goes viral
Hot. Yes, music and sex. Both Hot. Lovely, poetic, and hot.
Music, poetry, I guess wine, flowers all combined. Well done, even if I had to check out some of the terms. Good job.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Hot. Yes, music and sex. Both Hot. Lovely, poetic, and hot.
Music, poetry, I guess wine, flowers all combined. Well done, even if I had to check out some of the terms. Good job.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Lol Sheila... I remember our conversation and thought.. well I can do this yeah I can do this. I might be 61 but I can still do this. Almost put you in the notes saying " see there granny!"
Actually I took a 6 month advanced music appreciation class about a year ago. I know the terminology very well. That sunk in. However, I do not have a musical bone in my body. I was the only friggin one in the class who was not a musician...lol..I now hear all kinds of music differently. It was a tough class because I am musically challenged to say the least. Thank you friend..thank you.. now let's hope my sons and daughters don't see this although it would not surprise them. Lol..
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Screw 'em, if they can't take a joke. Nah, just kidding...how do they think they got here. Really!!!
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How did they get here? Ummm let me see. Immaculate conception? The first 5 miracles this side of Armageddon. Lol...
Comment from Nosha17
Good use of Italian musical terminology to accentuate the romance of the situation. Well chosen words and imagery to convey your thoughts of love. Enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Good use of Italian musical terminology to accentuate the romance of the situation. Well chosen words and imagery to convey your thoughts of love. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Nosha17, okay I hope you are not seventeen and read this. I would die. However, thank you for your time and your review. Jls.