Reviewers Taste Like Chicken
Short Story-Contest Entry40 total reviews
Comment from nor84
A wolf in sheep's clothing and tastes like chicken. Loved the cliches in this one! Great pictures, too. Best of luck, Mikey. This is a great contender.
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A wolf in sheep's clothing and tastes like chicken. Loved the cliches in this one! Great pictures, too. Best of luck, Mikey. This is a great contender.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Ok, you are so funny. You are able to put into words what others are thinking. I like the way you added what the fox was thinking (might have been a wolf). That really made the story. Your story had really good flow. I like the way you used the interesting font. I sometimes skip stories with little font. No, I do not need glasses. Thank you very much. I see nothing to change. You have a really good contest entry. I hope there will be more, so there will be a vote. Good job and good luck.
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Ok, you are so funny. You are able to put into words what others are thinking. I like the way you added what the fox was thinking (might have been a wolf). That really made the story. Your story had really good flow. I like the way you used the interesting font. I sometimes skip stories with little font. No, I do not need glasses. Thank you very much. I see nothing to change. You have a really good contest entry. I hope there will be more, so there will be a vote. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Nicely done as always. I wish I had known there was a woulf in the room prior to becoming a lamb .... hopefully you do not care for mutton. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Nicely done as always. I wish I had known there was a woulf in the room prior to becoming a lamb .... hopefully you do not care for mutton. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
:) Okay, I'm not sure if any of my comments are part of this soliloquy of yours, but in some ways, I'd like to be spoofed (lampooned) by your wit. :) Tongue in cheek, not at all, this was great. Loren
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:) Okay, I'm not sure if any of my comments are part of this soliloquy of yours, but in some ways, I'd like to be spoofed (lampooned) by your wit. :) Tongue in cheek, not at all, this was great. Loren
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! This is hilarious! I especially loved the howling interspersed, as if this wolf simply could NOT control himself at times!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Very. very funny - I enjoyed it immensely! Best of luck!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! This is hilarious! I especially loved the howling interspersed, as if this wolf simply could NOT control himself at times!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! Very. very funny - I enjoyed it immensely! Best of luck!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from adewpearl
I love the you're sorry passage LOL
This guy has a most amusing and edgy attitude, unlike anyone I've ever reviewed LOL
a fun observation about some of the behavior and attitudes seen among a few people here - thankfully the place is way way better than any of the complainers make it out to be :-) Brooke
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I love the you're sorry passage LOL
This guy has a most amusing and edgy attitude, unlike anyone I've ever reviewed LOL
a fun observation about some of the behavior and attitudes seen among a few people here - thankfully the place is way way better than any of the complainers make it out to be :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Patti R.
Mikey, Mikey, Mikey!! You are one bad dog! um, er, wolf.
I wouldn't know a better way to do the 'thoughts', but I did find this a bit of a distracting set up. Don't you dare call me nit-pickin'. I loved what you were doing, though, and I totally get it.
Only three months? It feels like I've known you for longer than that. Good luck to you in this contest. 'heard of deodorant?' cracked me up. Love ya.
Patti
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Mikey, Mikey, Mikey!! You are one bad dog! um, er, wolf.
I wouldn't know a better way to do the 'thoughts', but I did find this a bit of a distracting set up. Don't you dare call me nit-pickin'. I loved what you were doing, though, and I totally get it.
Only three months? It feels like I've known you for longer than that. Good luck to you in this contest. 'heard of deodorant?' cracked me up. Love ya.
Patti
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Nosha17
That was so good, humour is your forte. I can relate to every word. I liked the idea of Mr Wolf eating up his reviewer! He sure was a crazy poet! You deserve to win for originality and creativity. Faye
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That was so good, humour is your forte. I can relate to every word. I liked the idea of Mr Wolf eating up his reviewer! He sure was a crazy poet! You deserve to win for originality and creativity. Faye
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the pictures. I love the poem. I love the wolf in sheep's clothing. Some people do get an attitude when the review. some write only what they think is bad and do not mention anything they think is good. I would like a wolf to eat them up too. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
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I love the pictures. I love the poem. I love the wolf in sheep's clothing. Some people do get an attitude when the review. some write only what they think is bad and do not mention anything they think is good. I would like a wolf to eat them up too. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Twilightspire
Interesting take on what we really think when we hear those reviews and what we post as a reply.
I love the off-beat humor and imagery in this piece.
Who hasn't thought about eating a know-it-all reviewer. :D
Great work.
T.J.
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Interesting take on what we really think when we hear those reviews and what we post as a reply.
I love the off-beat humor and imagery in this piece.
Who hasn't thought about eating a know-it-all reviewer. :D
Great work.
T.J.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014