Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

To the author of AN AWKWARD MOMENT. I'm assuming that this is a true story, which prompted this short story. Good luck in the contest. It's humorous for sure. Carole

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014

Hi Carole, thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes - I appreciate both! Yep, true story! One of the few times I've been stuck for words! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent and funny writing on how to conveniently pass the buck.

Maybe, for two shorter and more abrupt sentences:

'You can ask me anything. Go ahead."

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014

Hi Ray :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! I also appreciate the suggestion, although I'll leave things as they are as I needed 50 words exactly for the contest! Kindest regards as always...:)

Comment from Goodauthor

Excellent

I wish a had a six for this! It was perfect! I can just hear the little guy asking his mother that question. I laughed every time I thought about it. That makes writing a review hard.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014

Hi Goodauthor :) Thank you so much for your great feedback! Your generous mention of a 6 made my day :) Kindest regards...

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

This made me laugh it's so funny, it's so real to life as well, which made it funnier, the picture goes really well also good luck in the competition, this is the one to beat in my opinion,
Andrew

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014

Hi Andrew :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from JM

Excellent

Great anecdote. If you figure out the answer, be sure and share it with your readers. LOL. I may need it someday.
Funny story. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014

Hi JM :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Ha - this was very cute and humorous to read. Great job of story telling in only 50 words. Good luck to you in the contest.
teresa

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014

Hi Teresa :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)