Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Bug, Hug, Lug."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from seaglass
This is cute and depicts the affection the two of you share. The nicknames are sweet. The rhyming pattern very interesting. I can see how it would work well with a tune.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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This is cute and depicts the affection the two of you share. The nicknames are sweet. The rhyming pattern very interesting. I can see how it would work well with a tune.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks friend them music is coming.Got a upgrade to my Encore programme recently. Turns out the old version was the thing that was causing all the computer crashes. I asked the supplier about the old version and Windows 7 and he said old version would not work properly in W 7 hence the multitude of crashes I was getting on the new puter. SO nice to have smoother running now. Only thing is my music programme is dependent on me having a good hearing day ho hum. We do have other nicknames for each other hehe.
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Music now on!
Comment from Gladness
Oh, very sweet. Nice sunset picture too. It sounds like you are a perfect pair, always loving and helpful to each other.
The way it should be. :)
Anita
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Oh, very sweet. Nice sunset picture too. It sounds like you are a perfect pair, always loving and helpful to each other.
The way it should be. :)
Anita
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks friend we do have other nick names for each other hehe. Appreciate the review.
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Music now on!
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with words that say so much. Good word flow and rhyming in this written word of love. You no doubt have a wonderful and beautiful marriage.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Good poem with words that say so much. Good word flow and rhyming in this written word of love. You no doubt have a wonderful and beautiful marriage.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Well mate God brought us together as I have said in my biography. A real miracle. Music is coming as I said above. We do have other nicknames for each other as well. Thanks very much for reviewing.
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Music now on!
Comment from c_lucas
I have heard cute names before, Geoff, but "Bug" and "Lug" are really out there. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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I finally got the music to play. Interesting tune.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I have heard cute names before, Geoff, but "Bug" and "Lug" are really out there. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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I finally got the music to play. Interesting tune.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Well she bugs me a lot mate hehe! Thanks for the f8ine review let you know when I put the music on it hope you will be able to hear it.
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You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie
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Music now on!
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I usually cannot get music, but I will try later today
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Glad you heard the tunes mate! God Bless
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You're welcome.
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
Heh, heh, heh! Very good, Sankey...you great lug! And you have a dear little bug... Very cute. Composed in a lovey-dovey moment of gratitude, I am sure. You are very blessed.
And where, may I ask, does this wonderful vista take place, exactly? (Don't say if you don't want to.)
Anthony.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Heh, heh, heh! Very good, Sankey...you great lug! And you have a dear little bug... Very cute. Composed in a lovey-dovey moment of gratitude, I am sure. You are very blessed.
And where, may I ask, does this wonderful vista take place, exactly? (Don't say if you don't want to.)
Anthony.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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On the Eastern side of the City of Penrith in NSW. When folks ask I always do my snooty accent and with accompanying flick of wrist say " Oh we live in the Eastern Suburbs...of Penrith!"
Thanks for the review a tune is coming.
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Home of the Panthers. Thanks for that. Ant.
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I have a photo of a family group at our 25th Anniversary we had at Panthers if I have an e-mail address for you. write me at sankey48@yahoo.com.au
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Music now on! nNow I know who you6 is mate ha thanks for the rersponse to the photo I sent you.
Comment from michaelcahill
Yep! I'm singing it already, Hahaha. That is musical for sure. Goodness, what a sunset. Wow. The sun doesn't set here, it scurries away. mikey
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Yep! I'm singing it already, Hahaha. That is musical for sure. Goodness, what a sunset. Wow. The sun doesn't set here, it scurries away. mikey
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I was looing for a better one see what I can come up with. We get some lovely sunrises too on the other side of our house. Our aspect is East/ West. Thanks for the review mate.
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Music now on!
Comment from kiwisteveh
What a lovey-dovey pair you two must be - didn't I just review the honeybun poem about you as well.
The bug/hug/lug rhymes give this a light-hearted feel and it is a happy expression of your love for each other - long may it last.
Steve
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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What a lovey-dovey pair you two must be - didn't I just review the honeybun poem about you as well.
The bug/hug/lug rhymes give this a light-hearted feel and it is a happy expression of your love for each other - long may it last.
Steve
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks kiwisteve appreciate you dropping by. Yeah you probably did I have a feeling I was using honeybun before I heard it on South Pacific or maybe it came from there being a musician. Watch for the music.
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Music now on!
Comment from CR Delport
Very few things are as comforting as a hug from a loved one. One can just get lost in those arms. I myself to love hugs. This is well done.
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Very few things are as comforting as a hug from a loved one. One can just get lost in those arms. I myself to love hugs. This is well done.
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks mate let you know when I put the music on it. Appreciate the review.
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Music now on!