Writing Prompt Entries 2014
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Comment from tfawcus
The implied double meaning of prey/pray makes one think. 'Perch', too, might be just the fish that the heron is praying for! Sad that so many of our rivers are in decline through mismanagement.
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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The implied double meaning of prey/pray makes one think. 'Perch', too, might be just the fish that the heron is praying for! Sad that so many of our rivers are in decline through mismanagement.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Hi Tony :) Thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)