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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I guess there could be worse fates since at least he has free room and board. This is well written with strong rhyme and meter throughout. You meet the contest requirements beautifully and I wish you all the best in the voting. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I guess there could be worse fates since at least he has free room and board. This is well written with strong rhyme and meter throughout. You meet the contest requirements beautifully and I wish you all the best in the voting. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from tfawcus
Very good. There have been some marvellous nonsense poems based on absurd names and yours ranks with the best of them! Dear old Axel, the child you love to hate!
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Very good. There have been some marvellous nonsense poems based on absurd names and yours ranks with the best of them! Dear old Axel, the child you love to hate!
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from Nosha17
Your nonsense poem was a fun read. Your character was really way out. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. I spotted a wee error-in verse 1, Christi. Good look in the contest. Faye
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Your nonsense poem was a fun read. Your character was really way out. Your rhymes worked well and it was an enjoyable read. I spotted a wee error-in verse 1, Christi. Good look in the contest. Faye
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review. I double checked the spelling, and that's how they spell Corpus Christi, Texas. Thanks again.
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Oops! I thought I had it right. Now I do. Thanks.
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I meant good luck!! You are welcome. Faye