Bible Stories in Rhyme
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Isaiah"Poetry and Stories from the Bible
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Comment from krys123
Carolyn, a very inspirational and stimulating home of a true follower of the Lord and who would be One of the first to spread the word among others. You fascinate me which are exceptional rhythm, meter and tempo which helped throw your rhythm smoothly throughout your poem while your rhyming also helped in your rhythm where they were neither force nor labored. Thank you for sharing them posting this and may you have a good one where you go.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Carolyn, a very inspirational and stimulating home of a true follower of the Lord and who would be One of the first to spread the word among others. You fascinate me which are exceptional rhythm, meter and tempo which helped throw your rhythm smoothly throughout your poem while your rhyming also helped in your rhythm where they were neither force nor labored. Thank you for sharing them posting this and may you have a good one where you go.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you dear Alex. I always appreciate your encouraging and thoughtful reviews.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
HI Carolyn, If some didn't know the story they do now...there was a time I wanted someone to help me with learning from the Bible...there is so much I would love to learn...I do know a lot of it...but so much more to learn...I love the last lines...Here am I, send me...thank you so much...so very well explained...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo great job you!!!Love
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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HI Carolyn, If some didn't know the story they do now...there was a time I wanted someone to help me with learning from the Bible...there is so much I would love to learn...I do know a lot of it...but so much more to learn...I love the last lines...Here am I, send me...thank you so much...so very well explained...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo great job you!!!Love
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you Linda, I am delighted you are enjoying this series. The Bible is still my book of choice to study and to just read. I learn something everyday and never tire of it.
I hope you are doing well. My sisters have been here, 5 out of 6 were together. What a reunion. ( Now I am even further behind, but it was worth it, LOL)
Love you, have a good, rest of the week.
:-) Carolyn
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I am so glad you had a great time with your sisters...that is so important...you will catch up...pity of time...take care...and you have sweet dreams...love you...smile...Linda hugs
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn - a wonderful spiritual message in this, a guidance as well as sharing wisdom by example. Expressive and I pondered it for awhile...soothing in the sharing as I contemplate my own life...You did this in a loving way, I could feel it within me.
Lovely throughout, skillfully penned.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Dear Carolyn - a wonderful spiritual message in this, a guidance as well as sharing wisdom by example. Expressive and I pondered it for awhile...soothing in the sharing as I contemplate my own life...You did this in a loving way, I could feel it within me.
Lovely throughout, skillfully penned.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Dear Maureen,
I so appreciate your fine comments, and that you enjoyed the poem, Isaiah.
The old Testament leads us so powerfully to the new Testament. It is a joy to study and see the unfolding of God's loving plan for mankind.
I love you and pray you are having a great week,
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
I like how you tell the story in a unique, informative, and simple way. The artwork added a nice touch as well.
Well done.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Hi,
I like how you tell the story in a unique, informative, and simple way. The artwork added a nice touch as well.
Well done.
Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Smilin' right back at you Jax.
Thank you for this positive review. I'm so glad you enjoyed Isaiah. :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
Well done with this one Carolyn, I love the book of Isaiah, which gives so much insight into the gospel of the kingdom! He also wandered around in the desert, naked, for 3 years," exposing "the nakedness of Israel! Nice smooth write, easy to follow, nice abcb, rhyme scheme, until rhythmic free last stanza! Articulate and expressive language, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Well done with this one Carolyn, I love the book of Isaiah, which gives so much insight into the gospel of the kingdom! He also wandered around in the desert, naked, for 3 years," exposing "the nakedness of Israel! Nice smooth write, easy to follow, nice abcb, rhyme scheme, until rhythmic free last stanza! Articulate and expressive language, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you Roy for this wonderful review, your comments and the awesome six stars. I always am encouraged by your remarks. I hope you and Elaine and all the kiddos are well.
Love, Carolyn
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We're all fine, you and Larry, Ok? Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Saucey
You gotta love Isaiah to be a chosen prophet declaring the coming Messiah, he spoke of Jesus born of a virgin, I especially love "Arise Shine for your light has come..." EXCEPTIONAL WRITE in my opinion. Thanks for sharing about one of God's amazing prophets.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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You gotta love Isaiah to be a chosen prophet declaring the coming Messiah, he spoke of Jesus born of a virgin, I especially love "Arise Shine for your light has come..." EXCEPTIONAL WRITE in my opinion. Thanks for sharing about one of God's amazing prophets.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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And thank you so much Saucey for your great comments and awesome rating. I love Isaiah as well, and have often referred to the book as , 'The Gospel, according to Isaiah'. Through inspiration of God, he was right on, in everything he prophesied.
:-) Carolyn
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Your gem gave me chills
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This so reminds me of one of my favorite songs, "Here I am Lord". This is a wonderful addition and you convey the essence of Isaiah beautifully. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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This so reminds me of one of my favorite songs, "Here I am Lord". This is a wonderful addition and you convey the essence of Isaiah beautifully. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Yes, I love that song, and another that has the actual words, "Lord send me." Thank you for this wonderful review and comments.
:-) Carolyn
