Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Wonderful poem full of truth from above. I wish you well no spags well done be glad to see where you go with this.
Artwork an excellent choice as well.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

the image is crystal clear. it sparkles and most attractive to the eye. I didn't see this contest. The eighth line is the same. Looks fantastic, some good rhymes and word choices. I'm mesmerized by the vivid blue colors, it twinkles. Good luck i this contest and congrats. wackydo

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

It's a site contest for July I think. Lines 1,4,7 are the same and 2 & 8 are the same. Triolet it's called. Something different. Thought I'd try it. Glad you liked it. Sometimes I'm surprised that I can do something so structured like that. I start out with numbers on the page and fill them in like a puzzle. Hahaha. Sometimes it works! Glad you liked it. Muchos Gracias Do Loco, mikey

reply by ProjectBluebook on 09-Jun-2014

Go for it! can't win if you don't enter, your on a roll. I may start calling you Lucky. you are a busy guy, I read some of the forums. I'm for more contests too. Later Lion King.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

A simple, but sincere message for those whose lives are based on evil and hatred. There is no room for it in a harmonious world. You have made good use of rhyming and language and it was a smooth and enjoyable read. Faye

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Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

If only this was true of all human beings, it would make this world such a better place to live in. This is very well written, Mike. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014