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She took his newspaper

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Comment from adewpearl
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oh, did I take - Oh
Talk about immediate magnetic attraction :-)
Why is it that when I'm on a plane it's always next to -- well, not this guy. LOL
I love the playful tone of your story, and it definitely qualifies as a story about a kiss between strangers :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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What a wonderful first kiss entry for the contest. You told a great story in 100 words! Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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Well I must say I think you handled this 100 Word Dash contest extremely well...and I am a sucker for a happy ending and you dangled a possible one right at the very end...enjoyed and I wish you luck - Dinah

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014