Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Written In The Stars"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from JennaG
Wow, Debra, this is so well done! I read the whole thing without realizing it was an entry for the tumbling words contest. It flowed beautifully and didn't seem restricted at all by the trickiness of this particular prompt. I entered this contest, too, and found it extremely challenging. Your poem made it look so easy. Very well written. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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Wow, Debra, this is so well done! I read the whole thing without realizing it was an entry for the tumbling words contest. It flowed beautifully and didn't seem restricted at all by the trickiness of this particular prompt. I entered this contest, too, and found it extremely challenging. Your poem made it look so easy. Very well written. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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Hi Jenna :) Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review and your good luck wishes... I appreciate both :) I've got to be honest, once I'd started trying to write something for this prompt, I wished I'd never bothered entering! It was so difficult to put together, took me days of fiddling about with it and my brain hurts now! Never again will I attempt anything this tricky LOL! Good luck to you in the contest also, I'll read and review the entries when the booth opens! Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have never ever heard of an Oz Harte Tumbling Words, form of poetry. I will have to look at the guidelines. I do know your poem is bouncy, there is a touch of desperation in the way you want him to stay with you. Your love can't quite keep him with you. I like the poem a lot, regardless of the rules, you know me, never one for rules, just enjoy what I read. :) Good luck in the contest, Debra, it really is a lovely poem. xsx Sandra Just been and had a look at the rules, well, you certainly did yourself proud, it is perfect, I have checked your last and first words!! LOL, Brilliant, Debra. xxxx
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reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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I have never ever heard of an Oz Harte Tumbling Words, form of poetry. I will have to look at the guidelines. I do know your poem is bouncy, there is a touch of desperation in the way you want him to stay with you. Your love can't quite keep him with you. I like the poem a lot, regardless of the rules, you know me, never one for rules, just enjoy what I read. :) Good luck in the contest, Debra, it really is a lovely poem. xsx Sandra Just been and had a look at the rules, well, you certainly did yourself proud, it is perfect, I have checked your last and first words!! LOL, Brilliant, Debra. xxxx
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Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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Hi Sandra :) Thank you for your wonderful review and good luck wishes! I appreciate both! Got to admit, this poem really messed my head up - so difficult, I've been playing around with it for days and days! Glad you enjoyed it.... it's not biographical I'm happy to report ;) Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Domino 2
Great to see you didn't give up and managed this very challenging contest, Debs.
You've managed to stick firmly within the rules, and you've created an excellent romantic poem that isn't obviously forced to meet them.
You also have an excellent rhyme scheme which must have been an extra challenge.
Nice one!
Good luck and best wishes, Ted.
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Great to see you didn't give up and managed this very challenging contest, Debs.
You've managed to stick firmly within the rules, and you've created an excellent romantic poem that isn't obviously forced to meet them.
You also have an excellent rhyme scheme which must have been an extra challenge.
Nice one!
Good luck and best wishes, Ted.
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Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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Thank you Ted :) Got to be honest, this contest played complete havoc with my brain!
Thanks for the good luck wishes as well as your lovely comments :) Debs x