Bible Stories in Rhyme
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Comment from Sylvia Page
Dear Carolyn,
Bless your heart, this is a beautifully crafted poem. You have given the true meaning to Daniel and the King. Well done again my friend.
Love and blessings,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Dear Carolyn,
Bless your heart, this is a beautifully crafted poem. You have given the true meaning to Daniel and the King. Well done again my friend.
Love and blessings,
Sylvia
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 24-May-2014
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Hi there dear Sylvia,
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I hope to have 20 to 30 in the book when finished. Pray my mind holds out. LOL
Love you,
Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn - thought provoking piece - solid form with strong rhyme and deeper message to your reader. Nicely done my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Love
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Dear Carolyn - thought provoking piece - solid form with strong rhyme and deeper message to your reader. Nicely done my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Love
Maureen
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Dear Maureen,
I am so happy you are enjoying this series. I appreciate your affirmation of the quality of the form as well.
I hope you are having a great weekend.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from royowen
Another triumph Carolyn, this is another good example of how well you adapt to these circumstances. I Like the way you followed the biblical story closely and we'll! We'll written with a great descriptive narrative, good couplet rhyming, nice even meter, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Another triumph Carolyn, this is another good example of how well you adapt to these circumstances. I Like the way you followed the biblical story closely and we'll! We'll written with a great descriptive narrative, good couplet rhyming, nice even meter, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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See what you started my friend, :-). I am happy you are enjoying this series of Bible stories in rhyme. I hope to have 20 or 30 when finished. The reading of each book prior to writing, to make sure I am 'telling it like it is' so to speak, is a blessing in itself. Thanks for the beautiful six award.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from 9999pool
Many of us choose to be a Daniel in real life.
We lived by our belief and faith and refuse to budge even when faced with terminal illnesses and deaths because we knew in our hearts that God will not abandon us under any circumstances, smiles.
We will live out our time here, which is immaterial and insignificant, as long as we toe the line about God and His Word. Smiles.
Great write and loved this series of characters in the Bible, :))
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
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reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Many of us choose to be a Daniel in real life.
We lived by our belief and faith and refuse to budge even when faced with terminal illnesses and deaths because we knew in our hearts that God will not abandon us under any circumstances, smiles.
We will live out our time here, which is immaterial and insignificant, as long as we toe the line about God and His Word. Smiles.
Great write and loved this series of characters in the Bible, :))
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
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Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thanks Ritchie, I hope to have 20 to 30 in the series when finished. So glad you are enjoying them. Your comment is so true, there are times in each of our lives that we feel like we are in the Lion's den. Thankfully God has experience in 'shutting' their mouths.
Love, Carolyn
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He always does, doesn't He? All i can say is that He is a jovial entity usually testing our limits. Guess we can match His plan for us all, smiles.
Welcome. Smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from chasennov
"Daniel" This is just absolutely a great poem you have created here about such a well loved, and well known story in the Bible. Well done.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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"Daniel" This is just absolutely a great poem you have created here about such a well loved, and well known story in the Bible. Well done.
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Comment Written 24-May-2014
reply by the author on 25-May-2014
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Thank you for your kind words, I hope to have 20 to 30 poems in this series when finished. :-)Carolyn
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You are most welcome, Carolyn. That seems like a big ask.