Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Oh my women are just like that, we always need assurance of the love of our partners. But I believe, even men ask questions like these. We all want assurance that we are loved. Your poem captured that emotion effectively. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-May-2014

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Sometimes it's best NOT to know, but of course we feel we need to in these situations.

Dramatically and emotionally written.

Best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 15-May-2014

Comment from JavaJunkie

Excellent

Yep, that is an important question. You have a good syllable count for your senryu that definitely deals with human emotions.

Good luck in the contest

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Comment from casini

Excellent

Nice poetic question knowing about your love. It felt like as if you are in a hurry to know about your love hanging on weak thread. Good luck to get a positive answer and also best wishes for the contest.

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