Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hey, Sankey, nice to meet you here at FanStory. Congratulations on this prologue of your new book, which sounds interesting, I will keep my eye out for the first chapter. I like true stories.

This was well written and wets the appetite for the first installment, and I didn't notice any grammar or style issues. It was engaging and not over cluttered.

Thanks for sharing your writing, which I found entertaining and would recommend to others for review, Ana.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Hi Anastasia I don't believe we have met before. I will reciprocate and look for your stuff. Tom informed me I still have another year of membership in which I hope to clean everything up and there is only one chapter to my biography to get finished. Please have a look at the other chapters of this book. I am glad you like true stories. My wife and I are the same.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Friendships don't have physical or spiritual boundaries. Sometimes they are by mutual interests. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks, Bro one wonderful thing I may have forgotten to mention in the Friendships chapter later in the book is these folks who have written this have been friends in a special way all these years. Sometimes we would only get together once a year but we always took up where we left off last time. We kept in touch in between on the phone and so on.

reply by c_lucas on 19-Mar-2018

You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Charlie these are bro and Sis in the Lord but I have to say I have some wonderful friends (Non Christians) I care for more than some Christians I know.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written foreword for your completed book. It is always an honor to have lifelong friends that have respect for who you are even when they know all your ins and outs of your character.

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks Sis for being "the first cab off the rank" Only one more chapter near the end to finish now. Tom informed me today I have a year left of membership, plenty of time to clean up and finish things before I go. God Bless.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Interesting summation of your life story. Bios are most always an enjoyable read. Good luck with yours. I will attempt to follow it as much as possible.

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks, Bro, it is very nearly finished. I had a battle getting someone to do a Foreword for me and I couldn't have asked for better people than my friend and his wife. Just one more chapter to finish and I have added the story about Fallin FOul of the Frauds in here now..originally in Geoffrey's MUses.