Comment from rouskin

Excellent

treetops sway sifting
debris from swirling sour air
gone elusive breeze
rotting wood strewn through desert
forest mirage provides shade

Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 14-May-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you. Tough competition in these site contests. All the big dogs come out!!

Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

I like the way you changed colors. The divergent shades of green looks good. Looks good. A good entry to the contest. Count your doubloons.

 Comment Written 14-May-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

I like to push the rules and ruffle the feathers. Hahaha. I'm sure the tanka people are cringing!! 3am... Perhaps I should sleep....... Enter a contest!! I posted another chapter. It's getting a little crazy.

reply by ProjectBluebook on 14-May-2014

I will check it out.

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

What humans do to this wonderful planet is really a shame, but sooner or later its going to come back to bite us. This is very well done.

 Comment Written 14-May-2014

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

They are clear cutting away all the forest and leaving behind so much to decay. They call it progress I call it waste and murder they are pushing the poor animals out of their homes then wonder why they get attacked by these animals.

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 Comment Written 14-May-2014