Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Well done! I thought the word association thing was acheap way of incorporating the prompt words, but it was all a setup for the hilarious final moment. And it's very funny. Great flash, Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thank you, m, for the excellent review.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Nice politically correct adherence to the letter of the (prompt)law, although the spirit took a drubbing. But, it is lucid, and all the words are there. So be it.

 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thank you, Red, for the excellent, albeit measured review.

Comment from Witwoo

Excellent

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant, and absolutely hilarious. I'm out of 6 stars for a while, so you're going to have to settle for 5.

Most excellent work, my friend.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014

Wow! I super appreciate the sensational review. Thank you.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I'm all alone in my house. I read your entry from beginning to end, remarking to myself that this was some intelligent stuff.

Then I got to the last line and roared in laughter so loud, I'm sure the neighbors will be coming over to check on me.

Thanks. I haven't spoken to them in years.

Let me know when the contest is over what your handle is. I'd like to fan you (and don't make anything sexual out of that!) I want to be at the front of the line when your post hits.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014

Thank you, Jay. I'm glad this one got a rise out of you. I appreciate your positive review.