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A Collection Of Short Form Poetry

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Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the author notes. My great grandmother died the day before her one hundredth birthday. She left a very sad sixty year old lover behind. Age, time, place has no control over love. I had a love that did not work out. But I am still glad I tried. It made me a better person. Great work.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

Comment from Nosha17
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They say that the course of true love never runs smooth, but I guess you'll never know unless you try. Sweet, simple words convey a strong message. Lovely illustration. Faye

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

Comment from Hadria
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Wow What glorious colours! A message of encouragement to the lonely, very well expressed.

Would 'lonely souls finally find
love's door never closed' work, or does the last line have to stand alone? Hadria



 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi Michael...

I really like the way you formatted your colors around the artwork, which is lovely... Great impact in this one...

Good luck in the contest...
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

Comment from CR Delport
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Love knows no time and have no age restriction. I believe true love is the purest of emotions there is. This is very well written. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

Comment from nordicgirl
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Awesome reflection on the power of love. Yes. This is quite correct.
Love can strike at any age
Anywhere and anytime.
We should always be open. The last five years could be lonely
Or files with joy. NG

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014