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Comment from royowen
I must admit whether someone doesn't care either for others or indeed cares for nothing. I still believe that everybody is worthwhile, irrespective of what they believe or do not believe! I know that because Christ died for all, then everybody is therefore worthwhile, but you're right if we are cut we bleed, and if we're struck we hurt! All of us matter! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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I must admit whether someone doesn't care either for others or indeed cares for nothing. I still believe that everybody is worthwhile, irrespective of what they believe or do not believe! I know that because Christ died for all, then everybody is therefore worthwhile, but you're right if we are cut we bleed, and if we're struck we hurt! All of us matter! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent message of 'you reap what you sew' (I think), Debbie.
My personal taste would be to leave the title and the squiggles out of the main text, as I find they distract from the main body of your words.
Maybe, with respect, also present completely in lower case and delete the punctuation.
Anyway, sorry to be a nit-picker, as I DID enjoy the read.
Best wishes, Ted
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Excellent message of 'you reap what you sew' (I think), Debbie.
My personal taste would be to leave the title and the squiggles out of the main text, as I find they distract from the main body of your words.
Maybe, with respect, also present completely in lower case and delete the punctuation.
Anyway, sorry to be a nit-picker, as I DID enjoy the read.
Best wishes, Ted
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
Comment from crystal brandon
Whoa wickedawesomepiem honey.hi my name is crystalbrandon.i liked your horror thrillerpoem it creeped me out.i am going too give you fivestars
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Whoa wickedawesomepiem honey.hi my name is crystalbrandon.i liked your horror thrillerpoem it creeped me out.i am going too give you fivestars
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2014