Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Interesting, image-filled, originally-written poem, my friend. Even tho the title & corresponding line have been used a million times, the rest of your poem lifts this from the possibility of being cliché. My favorite line for originality: "Pheromone hazy" . . . Thanks for sharing & good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Baleygirl,
sometime a cliché is all that there is... and if we stop using them do they become less a cliché? No matter, once the moving finger writes... it's yesterdays news.

Thank you for your review, kind comments and well wishes, it is most appreciated... take care.

With our thoughts we create,
original dialog?
James xx

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. This is a provocative wee piece. Unless it is just my rather odd mind this morning(been up a nd working my day job at 4a.m.) I think it has quite the great double entrendre..
I like the intensity I can feel coming off the poem.
It is hot too touch, this poem...

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Padumachitta,
didn't know if it was still snowing or cold were you are, so I sent a bit of heat your way just in case... smile))))))

and a day job, is exactly that... yours is a end of the night job at best... 4am Brrrrrrr.

Thanks for the wonderful review and comments... yes, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
ways to entice,
James xx

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Just a beautiful Nonet, with very colorful images, and tender thoughts to contemplate. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. It gave me warm feelings. Tony

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Tony,
happy to have warmed you up... thanks for your fine review and comments, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
an increased heart-beat,
James.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent syllable count for the nonet
I like your optional use of rhyme including the good proximate rhyme of
sweet/weak
excellent use of imagery in conveying this message of passionate desire
Brooke

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Hi Brooke,
thank you so much for such an encouraging review... you know I always appreciate what you have to say or offer.

Have a wonderful weekend doing what you do.

With our thoughts we create,
desired intentions,
James xx

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh my, the screen is melting with this one! (LOL) Sexy, romantic, tender and sensual, James. I loved it! I'm afraid you've caught me without sixes, dear knight, but man oh man, you need to write more of these!!! (LOL

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Oh sweet Princess, how my heart beats for such words... sexy, romantic, tender and sensual... now your just been a special friend and feathering my ego... but hey I'll take it, breathe it, and use the flight of your sentiments to encourage more heat to steam even the coldest of climates... (rye smile)

Thanks dear friend, I love your reviews... you always make me feel real special!

With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-flutters,
James xxx

reply by Dawn Munro on 29-Mar-2014

You ARE special. :) You are so welcome - it was such a pleasure, James!

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Dear James,

This is a fabulous nonet - truly.

Forbidden fruit .. true dat!

All the best in the contest - this is a really good one. :)

Have a super weekend.

Sonali

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Sonali,
thank you for your wonderful review and well wishes... and I hope your weekend is super-charged.

With our thoughts we create,
sensual delights,
James xx

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

Whoa, James. I'm all flushed. VERY sensual. I love the language you've used - lightning strikes in the heart and pheromone hazy. There's a delicious hint of the sinful in 'forbidden fruit' and a sexy suggestion in 'let me inside'.

Sexual desire on the boil. Nicely done. I also think your little 'thank you' for the art work is lovely. :)

Hope you kick ass in the contest.

Av

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Avril,
I don't think I will be kicking any ass, at best just kissing it.... smile, but thank you all the same.

Your comments and rating have surly put a half-mooned smile upon my face... so I thank you for such a wonderful review... you rock lady 'A'.

With our thoughts we create,
sensual delights,
James xx

Comment from damettagin

Excellent

Sparks fly when love connects, nicely interpreted as 'lightning strikes'. Desires and emotions outlined with simple statements. Proper syllable count and good choice of font. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Damettagin,
thank you for your encouraging review, it is most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
conscious choice,
James

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

This is a perfect nonet, I love your poem it was really passionate, and the page layout was lovely, good luck in the competition,
Andrew

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Andrew,
thank you for your kind words of encouragement and a fine review... most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
conscious thought,
James

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A excellent nonet with perfect syllable count. Your subject is beautifully penned and the display is lovely. A lovely poetic piece and I wish you luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014

Hi Dorothy,
thank you for such wonderfully kind and encouraging review, most appreciated.

With our thoughts we create,
loving emotions,
James xx