Senryu (Faith)
Senryu27 total reviews
Comment from pattipac
Michael, your well penned poem says so much about how life often turns out. We often think we have our path planned out,but suddenly everything is altered.
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Michael, your well penned poem says so much about how life often turns out. We often think we have our path planned out,but suddenly everything is altered.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from 24chas
This was very timely, mikey, with the Noah movie coming out. I like the way you expressed the definition of the word in your piece. Good job.
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This was very timely, mikey, with the Noah movie coming out. I like the way you expressed the definition of the word in your piece. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Marillion
What a clever way to talk about faith, and about the consequences of not having it. I love your mind, Mikey, because you look for different ways whereas so many settle on the typical. That's creativity. Hoping to catch back up on Yosemite today, brother.
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What a clever way to talk about faith, and about the consequences of not having it. I love your mind, Mikey, because you look for different ways whereas so many settle on the typical. That's creativity. Hoping to catch back up on Yosemite today, brother.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
This sparks my interest? Maybe, the frozen ice would preserve the ark. Be the discovery of the century. Wonder where you found this unit. good job, Mikey. wackydo
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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This sparks my interest? Maybe, the frozen ice would preserve the ark. Be the discovery of the century. Wonder where you found this unit. good job, Mikey. wackydo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Good Mornin' matey. Me ship run aground and the livestock all escaped! No one left to plunder!! By the way, you gave me a four. I once gave someone a one. Hahaha. 4am.... mikey
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I did, it was a mistake, I will correct the blunder. Thanks for telling me, I will adjust. Tell me when you get the time if you get the change. Me eyes must have got blurry, I'm sorry.
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I hope you got your update. E-mail me and let me know if you got the change. I seldom give anyone a four, it was a typo error and I hope the damage is irraversable, my bad! forgive me for me blunder Lion King. please reply so I know this is correceted.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This one is really clever, I do like it. I never understand these little ones, and don't write them for that reason. This one was so easy to understand and the message comes out strong and clear. Wish they were all like this one. :) xsx sandra
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This one is really clever, I do like it. I never understand these little ones, and don't write them for that reason. This one was so easy to understand and the message comes out strong and clear. Wish they were all like this one. :) xsx sandra
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from tfawcus
I'm not a great fan of these highly condensed Japanese forms of verse, Mikey, but this one is an absolute classic. The message hit me right between the eyes and left me reeling. The interplay between the first two lines and the third is magnificent.
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I'm not a great fan of these highly condensed Japanese forms of verse, Mikey, but this one is an absolute classic. The message hit me right between the eyes and left me reeling. The interplay between the first two lines and the third is magnificent.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So THAT's where I left it! I've been looking everywhere for that ark. Any animal bones in there?
Cute and clever! :)
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So THAT's where I left it! I've been looking everywhere for that ark. Any animal bones in there?
Cute and clever! :)
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2014