Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good imagery and alliteration in personal prison
I am thrilled you are home, and I understand that adjusting to a new way of eating and exercising, etc, is difficult for anyone, but I'm thrilled it is contributing to your health :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

I see my muse flying over the sea,
out of reach though for me or you.
Please muse return to your own home.

Ahh Ine, have no fear for she will eventually come home to rest again.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

reply by Gungalo on 23-Mar-2014

You too Ine.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

This is a very interesting poem that you wrote about yourself. I'm always happy to hear about you and how you're getting along. You write poems very well.

Kat

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

Comment from nelliesellie

Exceptional

I love the picture. I love the poem. I have been there. You are threatened with life saving surgery. You are bombarded with pain and pain killers. It seems like you have to chance all your life habits. You feel so unlike yourself. But you are fighting to keep that brain alive and functioning. Great work.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Very well written Ine, and yes I understand....
Quiet a change, everything is different after the hospital.
It takes some time to pick up your own life again.
The things which you used to do and the things you want to do. Must be a strange feeling. But take it easy,
You are good in describing your feelings, well done!!! Fia

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine. Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I can relate to your poem, I felt the same way when I came home from the hospital and some days after all those years there are time I feel I'm in a strange place due to my strokes.
I get short term memory and my mind goes blank I call them my Cookie moments. As my Diann use to say mommy I don't care where you are going as long as I came back LOL.
and praise God I did and do return.
your muse will come back in due time, you see it to knows you need to rest and get your strength back.
Take care and be strong.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

reply by misscookie on 23-Mar-2014

You're very welcome, you do the same.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is a good thing to come home from the hospital in better shape than you went it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.

reply by c_lucas on 23-Mar-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Your muse, too, may need a touch of freedom for renewal. Could it be that she is feeding differently and exercising to bring better life? May you both be restored. I love the color scheme in this -- reminds me of wood and leaves.

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.