The Case of Pig Number Three
a fairy tale with a clue27 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
Very cleverly done. I love that Columbo is the detective,
The dialogue was right on.
Very humorous story/poem that turns the original
on its head. Most enjoyable read.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Very cleverly done. I love that Columbo is the detective,
The dialogue was right on.
Very humorous story/poem that turns the original
on its head. Most enjoyable read.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Nancyjam. I am so pleased that you enjoyed this story poem. I do like Columbo. Maybe it's just the fact that he always knows who did it and then just figures out how to trip them up. And he has so much fun doing it.
Thanks for the good luck wishes. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debi - this is so well crafted it reads beautifully with strong content for a story poem. Expressive work in every way possible. I enjoyed reading this - a great submission and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Dear Debi - this is so well crafted it reads beautifully with strong content for a story poem. Expressive work in every way possible. I enjoyed reading this - a great submission and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Hi Maureen. I am so delighted that you enjoyed this story poem. You make such encouraging comments about the writing. Thank you for the good luck wishes and gracious comments. It makes me smile. I appreciate it. Debi
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi w.j.debi,
I'm sure Peter Falk would be flattered at the manner you've woven his fictional Lt Colombo into your poetic story.
I found it amusing, and a good read. Alas, the evidence may soon have been consumed ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Hi w.j.debi,
I'm sure Peter Falk would be flattered at the manner you've woven his fictional Lt Colombo into your poetic story.
I found it amusing, and a good read. Alas, the evidence may soon have been consumed ...
Patrick
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Patrick. I am flattered that you think Mr. Falk would have liked it. I am pleased you enjoyed reading this story poem and found it amusing. And who knows?with Columbo maybe he wasn't going to eat it. Maybe he was asking them to hand over the evidence. He is always so tricky when he catches the murders.
Comment from ChowChow
Now, this I love. It's just such a turn around about the Wolf and the pig. Then enters Lieutenant Columbo (I can see him now). WOW! You should share this one on facebook for others to enjoy. I'm sure they would... chowchow
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Now, this I love. It's just such a turn around about the Wolf and the pig. Then enters Lieutenant Columbo (I can see him now). WOW! You should share this one on facebook for others to enjoy. I'm sure they would... chowchow
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you, ChowChow! I am so flattered by the six stars and especially by the nice comments of your review! I am so pleased that you loved this. I find your review very encouraging. THANK YOU! Debi
Comment from Ben Colder
Reminds me of the movie fried green tomatoes. Good skit into poetry. Peter Faulk was great in the Colombo sires. Well done poet. Best to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Reminds me of the movie fried green tomatoes. Good skit into poetry. Peter Faulk was great in the Colombo sires. Well done poet. Best to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Ben Colder. I appreciate your encouraging remarks and best wishes. Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
This one was a fun poem to visualize. I love Columbo and just seeing him in his raincoat, talking to Mrs. White from Clue and the wolf was hysterical. I liked the rhyming and the dialogue woven in. Great poem.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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This one was a fun poem to visualize. I love Columbo and just seeing him in his raincoat, talking to Mrs. White from Clue and the wolf was hysterical. I liked the rhyming and the dialogue woven in. Great poem.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Wow. Thank you for the six stars! I am so pleased to hear you could visualize the characters in this story poem and that you found it hysterical. Thank you for the encouragement! Debi
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Haha. Very funny and we all know Columbo always comes back with, "Oh, just one more thing before I go and that is the question that lets them know he is onto their little scheme.
A well written poem in iambic pentameter and aabb rhyme that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Nancy
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Haha. Very funny and we all know Columbo always comes back with, "Oh, just one more thing before I go and that is the question that lets them know he is onto their little scheme.
A well written poem in iambic pentameter and aabb rhyme that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Nancy
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Honeycomb. Yes, Columbo has his famous "I gotcha line." When he says it, you know he has caught the murderer and they have no way out. I love that moment. Thank you so much for your analysis, good luck wishes and encouraging comments. Debi
