February rhythm
Free verse poetry32 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great free verse poem for the writing prompt. It has a nice flow to it. Good luck to you in the contest:)
~teresa~
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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This is a great free verse poem for the writing prompt. It has a nice flow to it. Good luck to you in the contest:)
~teresa~
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for this great review zanya
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem! The author's words are strong, creative and thought provoking. The poem flows well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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An excellent poem! The author's words are strong, creative and thought provoking. The poem flows well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I am simply delighted with this review - thank you for engaging zanya
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Mother Nature renews Earth's cyclical heartbeat
My kind of poem about mother Nature - with great
imagery in your words - a good contender
for the contest...
Good luck
Margaret
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Mother Nature renews Earth's cyclical heartbeat
My kind of poem about mother Nature - with great
imagery in your words - a good contender
for the contest...
Good luck
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you indeed for this review zanya
Comment from ccto12
Beautiful poem about the awakening of spring. How I wish it would get here! I like your line about the color of crocuses. They truly are the first flowers to herald in springtime. So pretty when you wrote "saffron blue and mauve" and the gentleness of those frail little newborn lambs on their "spindly legs". You really capture the sense of kinder weather with your line "Wind's raw edge softens. Can't wait for March! Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Beautiful poem about the awakening of spring. How I wish it would get here! I like your line about the color of crocuses. They truly are the first flowers to herald in springtime. So pretty when you wrote "saffron blue and mauve" and the gentleness of those frail little newborn lambs on their "spindly legs". You really capture the sense of kinder weather with your line "Wind's raw edge softens. Can't wait for March! Well done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from mauial
Loved the imagery and flow of thought composed in your free verse poem. Good alliteration too with: daffodils dare to dance, crows caw. Like the thought that dawn rises earlier with, light spills earlier through the curtain, and that sunset is later with, evening shadows fall ever later.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Loved the imagery and flow of thought composed in your free verse poem. Good alliteration too with: daffodils dare to dance, crows caw. Like the thought that dawn rises earlier with, light spills earlier through the curtain, and that sunset is later with, evening shadows fall ever later.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you indeed for this interesting review and those 6 stars zanya
Comment from evrenios
What a lovely work about spring! Writing in free verse gives the poet more chance to use metaphor and simile. You have done that so well here! Every picture you have drawn is vibrant and alive: "wind's raw edge; Light spills earlier through the curtain (so evocative!)Crows caw noisily from the highest branch etc. Loved it. In my observations of spring (even early spring) is that the birds I tend to hear are the song birds. The crows come out in this part of the country in the winter. You are to be congratulated on a terrific work.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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What a lovely work about spring! Writing in free verse gives the poet more chance to use metaphor and simile. You have done that so well here! Every picture you have drawn is vibrant and alive: "wind's raw edge; Light spills earlier through the curtain (so evocative!)Crows caw noisily from the highest branch etc. Loved it. In my observations of spring (even early spring) is that the birds I tend to hear are the song birds. The crows come out in this part of the country in the winter. You are to be congratulated on a terrific work.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Wow this review is wonderful - detailed and focused - thank you for taking time to read and engage and critique zanya
Comment from barleygirl
You have packed many springtime images into a short poem and many are very original & fresh in how you presented them. Great alliteration & movement: "Daffodils dare to dance" . . . I have to say "saffron" in the first line felt like a bump to me since I know it as being bright yellow/orange, not blue/mauve. All-time favorite line: "Timid new-born lambs balance on spindly legs" which is so original & true-to-life. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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You have packed many springtime images into a short poem and many are very original & fresh in how you presented them. Great alliteration & movement: "Daffodils dare to dance" . . . I have to say "saffron" in the first line felt like a bump to me since I know it as being bright yellow/orange, not blue/mauve. All-time favorite line: "Timid new-born lambs balance on spindly legs" which is so original & true-to-life. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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And thank you for this inspiring review zanya
Comment from barleygirl
You have packed many springtime images into a short poem and many are very original & fresh in how you presented them. Great alliteration & movement: "Daffodils dare to dance" . . . I have to say "saffron" in the first line felt like a bump to me since I know it as being bright yellow/orange, not blue/mauve. All-time favorite line: "Timid new-born lambs balance on spindly legs" which is so original & true-to-life. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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You have packed many springtime images into a short poem and many are very original & fresh in how you presented them. Great alliteration & movement: "Daffodils dare to dance" . . . I have to say "saffron" in the first line felt like a bump to me since I know it as being bright yellow/orange, not blue/mauve. All-time favorite line: "Timid new-born lambs balance on spindly legs" which is so original & true-to-life. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for this complimentary review zanya
Comment from pbroussard209
Dreaming of spring are we? lol. Great Spring time poem and hoping to see all of this soon. You have created a great picture here and I can't wait to see it for myself.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Dreaming of spring are we? lol. Great Spring time poem and hoping to see all of this soon. You have created a great picture here and I can't wait to see it for myself.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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So glad this little poem has touched many fanstorian hearts ! thank you for your critique and review zanya
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
a lovely poem, with a perfect description of the month February at your place. the poem is really beautiful as it beautifully describes the happiness in mother nature and the situations which one witnesses during the month.
best wishes
Visheshta
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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a lovely poem, with a perfect description of the month February at your place. the poem is really beautiful as it beautifully describes the happiness in mother nature and the situations which one witnesses during the month.
best wishes
Visheshta
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for this great review zanya
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welcome :)