Noises of War.
May we never hear them...(jaq cee)23 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
This is a very good rendition of sounds of war. I have never heard, nor experiences war on our shores, however, others have described it. The noise must be horrific. Good luck. :-) Carolyn
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This is a very good rendition of sounds of war. I have never heard, nor experiences war on our shores, however, others have described it. The noise must be horrific. Good luck. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 10-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014
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Many thanks Carolyn, long may you love without the experience. :) x
Comment from NicciFaye
I thought this was a pretty good cacophony poem. I like the rhyming and the realism of the poem you brought to life. Good luck in the contest.
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I thought this was a pretty good cacophony poem. I like the rhyming and the realism of the poem you brought to life. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014
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Cheers NicciFaye your words are appreciated :) x
Comment from 24chas
Love the way you spelled out the chaotic sounds of war. This definitely captured the theme of the contest. Good luck and well done.
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Love the way you spelled out the chaotic sounds of war. This definitely captured the theme of the contest. Good luck and well done.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014
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24chas, I had to pare it down a bit when I realised the line count. It's a subject that throws up so many sounds. Many thanks for your fine review :) x