Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "My Husband, My Hubby"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from Petriesan
I am sorry for your condition and happy you have such a wonderful supporter, proving not all men are cads. . . .
this reads really well. I could find no issues to comment on
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I am sorry for your condition and happy you have such a wonderful supporter, proving not all men are cads. . . .
this reads really well. I could find no issues to comment on
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your heart felt review, it meant a lot to me. Sorry for the delay and thank you for your concern. Also glad to let you know that my health is improving and I'm doing better. Gods love is always there, and prayer changes things.
Comment from abbasjoy
A lovely, touching poem, showing appreciation of one who is kind and giving. Although it is simply written, this is truly a tribute to a lovely human being. These kinds of husband are indeed a rare gem these days.
I am sure he appreciates your thoughtfulness in writing these kind words.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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A lovely, touching poem, showing appreciation of one who is kind and giving. Although it is simply written, this is truly a tribute to a lovely human being. These kinds of husband are indeed a rare gem these days.
I am sure he appreciates your thoughtfulness in writing these kind words.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your fine words about my poem, I really appreciate it and it means a lot to me. Sorry for the delay!
Comment from emrpoems
Do not depend on traditional medicine for help with your condition. Turn to homeopathy / alternative medicine . Every disease is curable but the authorities do not want us to get better because the big Pharma companies will crash and there will be no bit profits
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Do not depend on traditional medicine for help with your condition. Turn to homeopathy / alternative medicine . Every disease is curable but the authorities do not want us to get better because the big Pharma companies will crash and there will be no bit profits
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your true comments, sadly so true and I do not depend on them but rather turn to God and His wonderful solutions. He never fails! Sorry for my delay in writing you back but gladly I'm doing better now.
Comment from VaV-VOOM
To me this was very close to my heart because like you I am very deeply in love with my wonderful husband. Your husband should be very proud of the words you wrote. I felt the deep love coming from your words almost as if they were human. Great job and take real good care of that love sometimes it's hard to find. Write On! :D ?¥
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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To me this was very close to my heart because like you I am very deeply in love with my wonderful husband. Your husband should be very proud of the words you wrote. I felt the deep love coming from your words almost as if they were human. Great job and take real good care of that love sometimes it's hard to find. Write On! :D ?¥
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt review on my poem, I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it. The greatest love is really in giving of yourself not in feelings or spiritual highs. Gods enduring love.
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Amen and may you and yours have a very wonderful and safe New Year! Write On!! VaV-VOOM!!! â?¥
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhyming
good alliteration in helping hand and in marvelous man
good assonance and alliteration in like the light
a wonderful tribute to those who love and help us
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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solid use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhyming
good alliteration in helping hand and in marvelous man
good assonance and alliteration in like the light
a wonderful tribute to those who love and help us
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Very nice and very detailed review, it sure is helpful to get this kind as I have these rules mostly by inner feelings and sense of rhythm. Well, I learned some in the secondary school reading the old Viking Sagas and their history as well as their altogether unique poetry. I'm glad you liked my little poem about my husband. Merry Christmas, Gudbjorg
Comment from goompa
So sorry for your Parkinson 's but how great a man you have for your husband. I enjoyed your fine p;oem and wish you the best.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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So sorry for your Parkinson 's but how great a man you have for your husband. I enjoyed your fine p;oem and wish you the best.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Yes, having Parkinson's isn't the easy and it can be very debilitating both spiritually and physically but by leaning on God's help and what he has to offer you makes a big difference. Merry Christmas, Gudbjorg
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a very beautiful write, the passion in every line is evident. The love you feel for this wonderful man is great to hear about in your well written poem
Well done Mary
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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This is a very beautiful write, the passion in every line is evident. The love you feel for this wonderful man is great to hear about in your well written poem
Well done Mary
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful reaction about my poem. I really appreciate it. Merry christmas to you
Comment from AnnieDawn
I did enjoy reading your poem and especially liked the positive theme you used. A lot of poems like yours have so much suffering in them but they probably don't have a hubby like yours either. The rhythm was good and the only comment is about the end of the last two lines as the rhyme wasn't as good as the rest of your poem. Great job and I hope you succeed in your contest.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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I did enjoy reading your poem and especially liked the positive theme you used. A lot of poems like yours have so much suffering in them but they probably don't have a hubby like yours either. The rhythm was good and the only comment is about the end of the last two lines as the rhyme wasn't as good as the rest of your poem. Great job and I hope you succeed in your contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for giving me so wonderful reaction to my poem which was very helpful. Merry Christmas to you, gudbjorg
Comment from Keturah Martin
It is so beautiful when there is love and tranquility between husband and wife. God bless you for your beautiful writing. I'm so happy for you that have someone to walk with you who falls into your portrayed description. This poem flows beautifully like a gentle river. God bless
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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It is so beautiful when there is love and tranquility between husband and wife. God bless you for your beautiful writing. I'm so happy for you that have someone to walk with you who falls into your portrayed description. This poem flows beautifully like a gentle river. God bless
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful words about my poem and I'm glad you liked it. Marry Christmas to you, gudbjorg