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5/7/5 poems

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Comment from Curly Girly
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This is an excellent little verse:
dry winter wind swirls
across hushed bony forest
withered green leaves dance
And I think you have created a superb job with it. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from emrpoems
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All requirements fulfilled so you have the perfect entry.
The words create vivid imagery of what takes place but is seldom noticed. Best of luck in he competiion

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Princesseunice
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I like the giving of 'human' qualities to things like the forest and leaves.
Wonderful personification.

I wish you all the best in the haiku contest.
Cheers.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Kaye A
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This reminded me right away when my husband and I go walking in the woods in the fall. It brought forward memories right away. I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Debra White
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I enjoy the scene you paint in my mind with your well chosen words.
I love your description of the forest in winter as hushed and bony - very evocative.
Nicely done, good luck in the contest mystery writer!
Kindest regards, Debra :) x

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from RYME4U
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Well done. This follows the contest rules exactly and the picture it paints is vivid and clear.Good descriptive words.
Nice job!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Domino 2
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Thanks for entering, mystery writer, and for following all the rules.

This is a top entry with excellent words to create vivid imagery. It's the first I've read, but I already think it will take some beating.

Good luck, Ted

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
    I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)