Free Verse Collection 2
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Comment from watergirl
Ah, the wanting and the yearning, and solitude. You write well of such things. I love the line it is the stars that are not in constellations..... . You bring to notice a depth of humanity that does indeed require vast spaces like the sky with which to commune. I really liked your poem.
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Ah, the wanting and the yearning, and solitude. You write well of such things. I love the line it is the stars that are not in constellations..... . You bring to notice a depth of humanity that does indeed require vast spaces like the sky with which to commune. I really liked your poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
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you are so very in tune with what I was feeling when I wrote this. so pleased that you understood so well and liked it. it is actually raining here in the desert at the moment so, this is quite nice reading your wonderful compliments and listening to the rain. perfect. thank you so much, mike
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, michael, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful verse of the raindrops that reflect your missing love's face and the darkness mourns with you. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, michael, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful verse of the raindrops that reflect your missing love's face and the darkness mourns with you. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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lovely and encouraging words. so appreciated. I love being in the rain when it is dark. even if I am not longing for some lost love. there is just something about the magnitude of everything and connecting to it as the little but wondrous creatures we can be sometimes. glad you liked it. thank you kindly, mike
Comment from allborn66
This is a very beautiful poem. You inspire strong emotions. The word choice is wonderful. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
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This is a very beautiful poem. You inspire strong emotions. The word choice is wonderful. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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wonderful and encouraging words! I finally get to write some free verse after driving myself crazy with sonnets. ha! thank you so very much, mike
Comment from Sankey
Lovely poem my friend as usual. Can see a deep meaning in there. No spags that I can see. have to get back to the story for you soon. Thanks take care.
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Lovely poem my friend as usual. Can see a deep meaning in there. No spags that I can see. have to get back to the story for you soon. Thanks take care.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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thank you very much. got those sonnets out of my system for a bit anyway. will check out your story in a bit. new edits and such. mike
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Great I need to get back to reading a bit more
Comment from CR Delport
Wow, what a wonderfully written poem. This is really good. We're having a dry spring and pray every day for a little rain. Hope it comes soon.
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Wow, what a wonderfully written poem. This is really good. We're having a dry spring and pray every day for a little rain. Hope it comes soon.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. I am pleased that you liked this. I am in the desert and it is raining today. love it. thank you for all the stars and may it rain for you. mike
Comment from songbyrd
wow, that is awesome..just got my computer (somewhat) back online..this is my last read, gotta early appt..insteresting I was just reading about constellations and stars..just before I came to FS..so I really understood this line.. It is the stars that are not in constellations
that understand the dimensions of a heart... what a beatiful piece of work.. Take care my friend..
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wow, that is awesome..just got my computer (somewhat) back online..this is my last read, gotta early appt..insteresting I was just reading about constellations and stars..just before I came to FS..so I really understood this line.. It is the stars that are not in constellations
that understand the dimensions of a heart... what a beatiful piece of work.. Take care my friend..
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
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thank you very much. finally got sonnets out of my system for the time being. yea! glad you liked this. I have one of yours to look at in a bit. pleasant dreams, mike
Comment from country ranch writer
THE WANTING OF ONE DOES NOT GO AWAY YOU WANT IT TO STAY BUT ONE CANNOT. THE TRAIN WHISTLE REMINDS YOU OF THOSE LONELY WHISTLE BLUES THAT KEEP WHISPERING TO YOU. WHAT IS NOT MEANT TO BE CAN NOT TRULY BE FREE TO LOVE ANOTHER.SHE IS A RAY OF SUN SHINE
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THE WANTING OF ONE DOES NOT GO AWAY YOU WANT IT TO STAY BUT ONE CANNOT. THE TRAIN WHISTLE REMINDS YOU OF THOSE LONELY WHISTLE BLUES THAT KEEP WHISPERING TO YOU. WHAT IS NOT MEANT TO BE CAN NOT TRULY BE FREE TO LOVE ANOTHER.SHE IS A RAY OF SUN SHINE
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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it always makes me so happy when someone gets my long winded little poems. and you always do! thank you for your excellent thoughts and comments. warm regards, mike
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THANK YOU MIKE I AM GLAD I CAN RELATE TO THOSE DARK THOUGHTS