Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Wow, Debbie. I think you went down a list and included everything noteworthy about fall! Excellent rhyming quatrains with perfect tempo. Bravo! I wish I had a six for this. It's great.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013

Thank you, Ellen. I am so happy you enjoyed this~Debbie

Comment from Liandra

Exceptional

Your writing inspires me every time.
You paint a beautiful picture with your words and rhyme; a story of seasons captured by your eye and portrayed in colour.
I look forward to the next season.
Liandra

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013

Thank you again, my friend~Debbie

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

Your paint such a detailed picture, and one so in contrast to the seasonal change we on the other side of the equator are experiencing.

I love the flow of your poetry, it is well balanced and rhythmical. I wish all poetry on this site was as enjoyable as this

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013

Thank you so very much for your kind words and review~Debbie