Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The writer does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. The writer transitions the events well as the reader can feel the realness in this chapter. I think the writer does a good job on this chapter.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks Righteous I am glad to be a 'Righteous Writer' myself and not by anything I have done myself AMEN! I had a comment from one of the previous reviewers about use of names in my Copyrighted work so I have gone back and edited some names out. What do you think on that subject thanks a lot for coming by.

reply by Righteous Riter on 31-Aug-2013

Pray about it and do what's in your heart. If your heart says change it, then change it. If your heart says keep it the same, then keep it the same.

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013

Hi folks just been through and done another addition and edit in here. Hope you can check it out

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

This seems like just the kind of journal my grandchildren are asking me to write about myself. But alas, I can't remember enough of that era to tell the tale. Nice job on this one, my friend.


Here's a typo:

20 years after the time we are deaing(dealing) with, here.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

The typo king thanks you for picking that up. Should have seen the mess it was in earlier had to edit THREE TIMES for font errors Grr. Thanks fore the review hope you read Chapter 6 it was a story on its own but it belongs in with the book.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

have done some deiting if you would like to come back and read it again thanks

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013

Hi folks just been through and done another addition and edit in here. Hope you can check it out

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

Hi Sankey, wow, you were a busy young man, great detail about church and jobs. Well written, are you using real names of people here? I'm not sure about copyright law on a biography. You might need to look into it? Best wishes, Pete :)

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks I will there is nothing derogatory I might remove any last names if they are showing several of the places I worked don't exist anymore now anyway.
Thanks for the review.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

have done some deiting if you would like to come back and read it again thanks

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013

Hi folks just been through and done another addition and edit in here. Hope you can check it out

Comment from chromeangel33

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this and I plan to take a look at the chapters before this. Your writing style is very engaging and as far as I can see there are no grammatical errors. Awesome job!

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks very much I appreciate your wonderful review. I just also incorporated a story I did a while ago that is related to everything else in this book it is Chapter 6. Enjoy and certainly let me know if there are any changes needed. I agree with a number of reviewers in here we need to Eeditt" Ediit" "Edit" hehe Can't remember if I have read any of your stuff I have a great group of reviewers whose stuff I also review thinking of getting a FRA Group going ie "FanStory Reviewers Association" so we can all support each other. Nice to meet you.

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013

have done some deiting if you would like to come back and read it again thanks

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013

Hi folks just been through and done another addition and edit in here. Hope you can check it out