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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "a bluebell wood"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from DanielEkine
Very impressive nonet by the author. Very well done.
"Walk this wood of a luminous hue
a delicate carpet so blue
nature gives us such treasure
a view beyond measure
in springtime they bloom
silent bells chime
just seeing
makes us
sigh"
Nice format and rhyme.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Very impressive nonet by the author. Very well done.
"Walk this wood of a luminous hue
a delicate carpet so blue
nature gives us such treasure
a view beyond measure
in springtime they bloom
silent bells chime
just seeing
makes us
sigh"
Nice format and rhyme.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for that kind review I appreciate it.
Comment from Dickleeshia
A nonet poem dedicated to blue bells so delicate they are like nature's carpet and treasure.
They blossom in spring like bells that don't ring.
We can only heave a sigh upon seein them in their glorious hue of blue!
Impressive praise of a lowly flower.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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A nonet poem dedicated to blue bells so delicate they are like nature's carpet and treasure.
They blossom in spring like bells that don't ring.
We can only heave a sigh upon seein them in their glorious hue of blue!
Impressive praise of a lowly flower.
Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the review and you lovely comments. I appreciate it.