Rabbit
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Life Goes On"A Boy's Story of the rural South
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Comment from emjaihammond
From the first time I met Rabbit and Virge on Fanstory, I fell in love with the characters. This is by far one of my favorite stories. Please let it become a published work so many others can enjoy it. You write from your heart and it comes through so well. Loved this chapter. I felt sad at seeing such a character leave us, but as was said, he had a pretty good ride.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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From the first time I met Rabbit and Virge on Fanstory, I fell in love with the characters. This is by far one of my favorite stories. Please let it become a published work so many others can enjoy it. You write from your heart and it comes through so well. Loved this chapter. I felt sad at seeing such a character leave us, but as was said, he had a pretty good ride.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind words! Bill
Comment from Norbanus
A super, well structured segment. It's enough to bring a tear to these crusty old eyes. You show us innocence through Rabbit and wisdom, to. I wish I had invented him.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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A super, well structured segment. It's enough to bring a tear to these crusty old eyes. You show us innocence through Rabbit and wisdom, to. I wish I had invented him.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
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What a nice compliment! I'm glad you've enjoyed this novel. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from Cariboubill
Just great writing! I'm smiling with tears in my eyes. Would sure like to see the finished book. Rabbit has so much innocent wisdom. A believable young man. The characters are real to me. A good read!
...Bill
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Just great writing! I'm smiling with tears in my eyes. Would sure like to see the finished book. Rabbit has so much innocent wisdom. A believable young man. The characters are real to me. A good read!
...Bill
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thank you for such a kind and generous review! Bill
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'm sure I would have like Old Virge. I was born in 1927 and had my very own Nanny. She was a wonderful lady. We had a whole family of color. My great-gandparents owned slaves. They treated their slaves good. When they were freed many came and asked my grandfather to protect them. Good story. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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I'm sure I would have like Old Virge. I was born in 1927 and had my very own Nanny. She was a wonderful lady. We had a whole family of color. My great-gandparents owned slaves. They treated their slaves good. When they were freed many came and asked my grandfather to protect them. Good story. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks Evelyn - I'm always glad when you stop by. Bill
Comment from RazberryBullet
Loved this!..."Awake, awake, the dawn is here, the air is full of atmosphere." :)
How lovely... "He didn't look any different to me than he did when I was your age. He's been old forever. He's had a pretty good ride."
Interesting...I was even more confused when I found out that my grandparents paid for Virge's hospital stay and for his funeral. I don't know.
Got a chuckle here:..."Just know that old Virge will be there before you. He'll be waiting for you." "Yes Sir, I reckon he will be, and I'll be glad to see him. I've got to tell you though, I ain't in no hurry." :)
A lovely, lovely ending...Just know that old Virge will be there before you. He'll be waiting for you." "Yes Sir, I reckon he will be, and I'll be glad to see him. I've got to tell you though, I ain't in no hurry."
Wonderful!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Loved this!..."Awake, awake, the dawn is here, the air is full of atmosphere." :)
How lovely... "He didn't look any different to me than he did when I was your age. He's been old forever. He's had a pretty good ride."
Interesting...I was even more confused when I found out that my grandparents paid for Virge's hospital stay and for his funeral. I don't know.
Got a chuckle here:..."Just know that old Virge will be there before you. He'll be waiting for you." "Yes Sir, I reckon he will be, and I'll be glad to see him. I've got to tell you though, I ain't in no hurry." :)
A lovely, lovely ending...Just know that old Virge will be there before you. He'll be waiting for you." "Yes Sir, I reckon he will be, and I'll be glad to see him. I've got to tell you though, I ain't in no hurry."
Wonderful!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks RB - I always appreciate kind words and wonderful ratings from writers I admire! Bill
Comment from humpwhistle
Easily the most moving of you chapters, Bill, as it should be. I really like the touch at the end when admit
having lost his knife. If there's an element of truth in that, it must bother you still.
Well done, my friend.
Peace, Lee
you batted your eyes? You little devil, you!
In this context Bill, I think it should be 'We sat there for a while...' (not awhile).
'No, sir, I don'tneed to do that.'
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Easily the most moving of you chapters, Bill, as it should be. I really like the touch at the end when admit
having lost his knife. If there's an element of truth in that, it must bother you still.
Well done, my friend.
Peace, Lee
you batted your eyes? You little devil, you!
In this context Bill, I think it should be 'We sat there for a while...' (not awhile).
'No, sir, I don'tneed to do that.'
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks Lee - this has been a labor. I'm much more comfortable with stand alone stories. I appreciate you following and supporting this work. Bill
Comment from Selina Stambi
What a fabulous chapter.
I'm sad that you lost the knife, though.
What a lovable character Virge was.
I've really enjoyed this story, bh.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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What a fabulous chapter.
I'm sad that you lost the knife, though.
What a lovable character Virge was.
I've really enjoyed this story, bh.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks for reading and your kind comments. I appreciate both! Bill
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my!!! This is extremely emotional. I had to wipe tears. You did a great job writing this. I enjoyed every word I read. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Oh my!!! This is extremely emotional. I had to wipe tears. You did a great job writing this. I enjoyed every word I read. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much Barbara for your kind and generous review! Bill
Comment from Titan Black
Yes, virge seemed like a nice person.
And it was unfortunate that he would
have to die like that. But I guess when
its your time to go, there's no cheating.
You write very well. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Yes, virge seemed like a nice person.
And it was unfortunate that he would
have to die like that. But I guess when
its your time to go, there's no cheating.
You write very well. Keep writing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thanks for reading and your kind feedback. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, this is so very touching - it felt like Virge and Rabbit and I were pals as I read this, and the whole thing is so authentic! You have written something very special here, in my opinion. I wouldn't change a word.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Oh, this is so very touching - it felt like Virge and Rabbit and I were pals as I read this, and the whole thing is so authentic! You have written something very special here, in my opinion. I wouldn't change a word.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Thank you for your kind and generous feedback. This is written as fiction, but very much based on fact. I've compressed a lot into a summer, etc., but Virge is based on a true character and of course, Rabbit is near and dear. Bill
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It was entirely my pleasure - one of the most wonderful stories I've read on this site (and I loved your story about Jay as well - you write with such heart, Bill - a true talent).
