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And then there's Grace

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A collection of Spirtual poems

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Comment from poeticpatchwork
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Wonderful poem with a very important message about the fields that are ripe for harvest! God's done the work and we just have to go out and bring them in! Thanks for penning it so beautifully!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    I appreciate your insightful comments. Thank you so much, Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi Carolyn,
I think you have penned a very wise write. It is like a field ready for harvest. Beautiful and deeply powerful imagery. Loved also your inner guidance you share with your readers. Overall a great work and one I enjoyed reading and pondering over.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Thank you Maureen, I am glad you enjoyed reading 'Harvest' and pray you are doing well today. Also thanks for the good luck, (have yet to win, I am on a mission LOL) Love, Carolyn
reply by Maureen's Pen on 27-Jun-2013
    Today is a good day - taking it slow and nature is the greatest of healers for me to get strong again.
    Love
    Maureen x
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Hello notes,
What a beautiful poem. It was a joy to read. You certainly write in a positive and uplifting mode and share some outstanding wisdom. Brilliant presentation. Thanks for sharing. Warm regards, W ^-^

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    And thank you for such a 'positive and uplifting' review. I am glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GE Parson
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Tremendous Missions poem. Ought to be posted permanently in every church youth class room.
Let me add a complimentary Missions poem to yours.
Brother Jerry

Working In The Vineyard

WORKING in the vineyard, bearing precious fruit
Working very faithful, sowing seeds of truth.

His yoke is easy, and His burden light,
Oh what a joy, to serve the Lord day and night!

WALKING with the Savior, through this barren land,
Trusting in His power and wisdom for every situation
to understand.

He promised to be with us, His guidance all the way,
So keep working and walking with Jesus every night and day.
By G. E. Parson





Your Brother in Christ, -Jerry

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Jerry, I so appreciate your wonderful comments and the poem you wrote as well. The six star is a real bonus. :-) Thank you so much, Carolyn
Comment from RedGryffyn
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Loved this poem found it excellent. Very well written and imagery was clearly present. Loved the profound message and it flows. It makes the reader reflect which is a sign of powerful writing. Splendid job.

Red Gryffyn


 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    My best to you for such a wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn
Comment from SteveY
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Wow really nicely done. Nice flow and rhythm in this well thought out poem. Good use of rhyme as well. What you sew, you reap, I like it a lot!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    I am glad you liked this one. Just plain 'Missouri' talk,
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from alexgeorge
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God's harvest involves the sharing of love and this is boundless and covers everyone. And in the sharing it grows and encompasses the world over. The Lord has taught us to give.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Thank you for your insightful comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jandeck
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This beautiful poem should be enjoyed and celebrated for the truth and hope it brings to the reader. Loved the comparison of the golden fields to our souls ready to harvest. Well done!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    I appreciate the wonderful comments you have made. Thank you so much. Carolyn
Comment from MissMerri
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You have captured the essence of this Biblical admonition quite well in your lovely poem. The wording sounds scriptural and the message is very clear. Your presentation is also beautiful and in keeping with the theme. I enjoyed this very much.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Hi there, I am happy you enjoyed this one. I loved the picture myself, glad you did too. Carolyn
Comment from jaded831
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My name is Carolyn too. I enjoyed reading your poem, it reminded me I have been to selfish with my love. I know we should spread love around, I do the best I can. I guess that's all he want anyway.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
    Hi Carolyn, thank you for liking this one. :-) Carolyn