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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Keep Me"A collection of Spirtual poems
24 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very reverant and devout expression of faith.
A beautiful prayer.
Very thoughtfully written.
Formatted and presented well.
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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A very reverant and devout expression of faith.
A beautiful prayer.
Very thoughtfully written.
Formatted and presented well.
Comment Written 23-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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And your review is wonderful. I can always tell when a reader is close to God. Carolyn
Comment from amarherig14
I love when you write spiritual poetry. The words flow from your heart and make you a good witness for Him ,from who all blessings flow.He will never leave or forsake you because He promised so.May He keep you in the solace of His loving arms. I liked the repetition of :" Keep me."The imagery and presentation is excellent. Good use of alliteration in : whirling world and strife and stress.
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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I love when you write spiritual poetry. The words flow from your heart and make you a good witness for Him ,from who all blessings flow.He will never leave or forsake you because He promised so.May He keep you in the solace of His loving arms. I liked the repetition of :" Keep me."The imagery and presentation is excellent. Good use of alliteration in : whirling world and strife and stress.
Comment Written 23-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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What a wonderful and insightful review you have given me. I appreciate the rating, and most of all, I appreciate that you 'know'. Have an awesome day, Carolyn
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You are welcome,Carolyn.I love spiritual poems. Yours was like a prayer.Blessings,Margie
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A humble prayer and confident approach to Lord for keeping the mind positive upon mankind and close to Lord in all courses of living emanating lights to see all clear for secured righteous living, inspirational work, I liked. 2/235
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A humble prayer and confident approach to Lord for keeping the mind positive upon mankind and close to Lord in all courses of living emanating lights to see all clear for secured righteous living, inspirational work, I liked. 2/235
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Comment Written 23-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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I am so very happy you enjoyed the poem. Your review means so much. Carolyn
Comment from chrisari018
I thought this was so beautiful. The old english only enhanced it more and turned it into a piece of art. The statements so true wgen you give your grief and problems up it truly gives you peace of mind. i think it was very well written.
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I thought this was so beautiful. The old english only enhanced it more and turned it into a piece of art. The statements so true wgen you give your grief and problems up it truly gives you peace of mind. i think it was very well written.
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Comment Written 23-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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With God all things are possible. I thank you so much for your great comments. The best to you always. Carolyn