All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Mother's Day"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Vampires kiss
This is a good poem, I really enjoyed it! I believe that they do know we are there and they know the trees are breathing! You do have a gift for poems and as it turns out stories to!
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This is a good poem, I really enjoyed it! I believe that they do know we are there and they know the trees are breathing! You do have a gift for poems and as it turns out stories to!
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reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thx so much Vk - lavish praise!! :)S
Comment from MizKat
Sharyn - This is a beautiful Mother's Day poem. I enjoyed every word of it. My mom's been gone for a long time now. Kat
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Sharyn - This is a beautiful Mother's Day poem. I enjoyed every word of it. My mom's been gone for a long time now. Kat
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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They're always with us somewhere in spirit, Kat, right?
:)Sharyn
Comment from Sararb
This is so beautiful. A lot of us will be visiting at our Mothers graves today placing flowers there for them. I always wonder if they know that we are there. Sara :)
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This is so beautiful. A lot of us will be visiting at our Mothers graves today placing flowers there for them. I always wonder if they know that we are there. Sara :)
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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and a double thank you my dear! aaah "Sara" - now I know!!! I so appreciate your lovely six for this one!
:)Sharyn
Comment from GWinterwin
What a pretty tribute to mothers. Your words flow well as you think of moms that have left this earth but are never forgotten. A heart felt poem my friend. God bless you for sharing with us.
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What a pretty tribute to mothers. Your words flow well as you think of moms that have left this earth but are never forgotten. A heart felt poem my friend. God bless you for sharing with us.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
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thx so much GW, as always!
:) Sharyn
Comment from MM lives on :)
A simply wonderful dedication to your mother and all our mothers who have passed and trying to put ourselves in their proverbial shoes, well done!
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A simply wonderful dedication to your mother and all our mothers who have passed and trying to put ourselves in their proverbial shoes, well done!
Comment Written 12-May-2013
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Thx so much Chris! :)S
Comment from Opal H.
This is kind of mysterious, kind of sad, kind of happy, kind of touching ... Wow, this poem is a lot of things at once. Good poem :)
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This is kind of mysterious, kind of sad, kind of happy, kind of touching ... Wow, this poem is a lot of things at once. Good poem :)
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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I always like to put "layers" in poetry, Opal ... in this one, my question I leave you with would probably be ... can she see me? is her spirit close? (My own mother is still alive & kicking by the way - but I often feel like this about my dad, who died many years ago).
:)Sharyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A wonderful piece and I can vouch that yes to all the questions. they are there. this is a great piece and so free and flowing.
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A wonderful piece and I can vouch that yes to all the questions. they are there. this is a great piece and so free and flowing.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
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Bless you Barb! :)S
Comment from Scarbrems
Worth the stars just for the last lines alone: "do they love the trees?
and can they hear them breathe?" - beautiful, touching and lovely. Has your own mother now passed on, Sharyn? Incidentally, mother's day was ages ago in the UK and all these reference to it on here confused the hell out of me, so much so that I almost sent my mum another card.
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Worth the stars just for the last lines alone: "do they love the trees?
and can they hear them breathe?" - beautiful, touching and lovely. Has your own mother now passed on, Sharyn? Incidentally, mother's day was ages ago in the UK and all these reference to it on here confused the hell out of me, so much so that I almost sent my mum another card.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Well THAT would explain why my son in the UK hasn't called me today!! GRRR! Actually my own mother is very much alive and kicking, but I DO feel this way about my dad, who died more than 20 years ago - I adored him, and still feel him with me sometimes, even though I have trouble now remembering his face ...
Thank you so very much for the lovely sixer on this one!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend I had mother day a few weeks ago my first without mum and it was very hard I miss her so much happy mothers day my friend and well done on this write regards Jill
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This is very well written my friend I had mother day a few weeks ago my first without mum and it was very hard I miss her so much happy mothers day my friend and well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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and another lovely thank you!! Happy Mother's Day to you also my dear!
:)Sharyn
Comment from robina1978
Your mother I think died, but this poem about graveyards honours her so well. I think they might feel us visiting them at the grave.
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Your mother I think died, but this poem about graveyards honours her so well. I think they might feel us visiting them at the grave.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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I hope they do, Ine - I really do. Actually my mother is still alive, but I do feel this way about my dad, who died many years ago - and I still feel him with me sometimes ... so I always wonder ...
Bless you for your lovely six on this one my dear - so much appreciated!
Best wishes
Sharyn
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sorry for not understanding and very welcome to the review, Ine
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:)