You Are My
A Contest Entry23 total reviews
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
I really like some of the imagery you've got going on in this poem. In particular, I like the ever changing, still there moon and then also your take on the night, sometimes the only space of time we have to share with our loves.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I really like some of the imagery you've got going on in this poem. In particular, I like the ever changing, still there moon and then also your take on the night, sometimes the only space of time we have to share with our loves.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the things that make a love everything in your life. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the things that make a love everything in your life. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Sam Mendonca
Excellent written expressing the emotions and feelings of the author.
Our loved ones are everything to us, as you very well described in your poem.
The photo is awesome with the poem. :D
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Excellent written expressing the emotions and feelings of the author.
Our loved ones are everything to us, as you very well described in your poem.
The photo is awesome with the poem. :D
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much for the most kind review and stars