Rabbit
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Chapter 12, Part One, Snakes"A Boy's Story of the rural South
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Comment from Judy Couch
I like the way you use the dialect of Rabbit and of Virge. I like the description of the new baby as looking like a shriveled up frog. I loved the story of Curly Kale. I am enjoying this book. It's funny and fun to read.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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I like the way you use the dialect of Rabbit and of Virge. I like the description of the new baby as looking like a shriveled up frog. I loved the story of Curly Kale. I am enjoying this book. It's funny and fun to read.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
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Thank you Judy - I'm glad you're enjoying. There are four, or perhaps five more chapters. Regards, Bill
Comment from adewpearl
My grandparents' house - grandparents' - plural possessive
I love the description of his grandparents with their morning bathroom routine LOL
Great dialogue throughout during this emotional time
I love Virge's thoughts about God's critters, even including snakes, and you work the back story in well to explain Grandma's fear
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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My grandparents' house - grandparents' - plural possessive
I love the description of his grandparents with their morning bathroom routine LOL
Great dialogue throughout during this emotional time
I love Virge's thoughts about God's critters, even including snakes, and you work the back story in well to explain Grandma's fear
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Thank you Brooke - I'm always glad when you stop by and always glad for your willingness to help. I might learn to write some day. By the way, just found out that one of my stories will be in a "Chicken Soup" book in August. Yay ... even get paid for it! Lol Bill
Comment from barkingdog
Poor Grandma. It's good that Virge can find a use for the kingsnake. We had one get in the pool and didn't kill it either.
Your dialogue is so smooth, it's like listening in on a conversation. I love these 'Rabbit' chapters.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Poor Grandma. It's good that Virge can find a use for the kingsnake. We had one get in the pool and didn't kill it either.
Your dialogue is so smooth, it's like listening in on a conversation. I love these 'Rabbit' chapters.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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I love you reading these chapters! Thanks for staying with the story and your kind feedback. Bill
