Declined: An Earth Day Lament
a rhymed poem for Earth Day144 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
It will be too late if something isn't done soon. Like the infrastructure that crumbles and isn't repaired, they wait for a bridge to fall and then realize they were remiss.
The bridge can be fixed. Those that died are forever lost.
When trees are gone, we are gone. We don't build trees. They are a gift.
Great rhyme, Brooke. Thought provoking.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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It will be too late if something isn't done soon. Like the infrastructure that crumbles and isn't repaired, they wait for a bridge to fall and then realize they were remiss.
The bridge can be fixed. Those that died are forever lost.
When trees are gone, we are gone. We don't build trees. They are a gift.
Great rhyme, Brooke. Thought provoking.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
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a perfect analogy, Ellen - we are a crisis-oriented people. We wait for the sky to start falling before we take notice. One wonders if we will all be wearing oxygen masks before someone says, Gee, we need to clean up this mess. Thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
A 'no' from Mother Earth will leave us devastated... She has been too kind for too long. Both stanzas ring true, Brooke. My granddaughter has yet to hear a 'no' from her 'too loving' mom...:) A perfect tribute for Earth Day.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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A 'no' from Mother Earth will leave us devastated... She has been too kind for too long. Both stanzas ring true, Brooke. My granddaughter has yet to hear a 'no' from her 'too loving' mom...:) A perfect tribute for Earth Day.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Belinda, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from country ranch writer
WE MAYBE ABLE TO GET BY WITH ARTIFICIAL LIGHT BUT WE MUST HAVE TREES AND FLOWERS AND WATER IN ORDER TO SURVIVE AND WE SHOULD LEARN NOT TO BE SO WASTEFUL WITH WHAT GOD HAS GIVEN US
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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WE MAYBE ABLE TO GET BY WITH ARTIFICIAL LIGHT BUT WE MUST HAVE TREES AND FLOWERS AND WATER IN ORDER TO SURVIVE AND WE SHOULD LEARN NOT TO BE SO WASTEFUL WITH WHAT GOD HAS GIVEN US
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, country ranch writer - I couldn't agree more :-) Brooke
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Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Yes, indeed, it certainly is a nasty blow when grown children hear "no"! I loved this poem. Mother Eath has patiently endured our abuse far too long. I hope we take responsibility for the damage we are doing to ourselves and to her before it's too late. You related your message in a gentle but powerful manner. Thanks, dear Pearly One, for a terrific sharing.
Hugs, W ^-^
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Yes, indeed, it certainly is a nasty blow when grown children hear "no"! I loved this poem. Mother Eath has patiently endured our abuse far too long. I hope we take responsibility for the damage we are doing to ourselves and to her before it's too late. You related your message in a gentle but powerful manner. Thanks, dear Pearly One, for a terrific sharing.
Hugs, W ^-^
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much, Whiz :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Oh how your poem rings so true with me! It is a constant frustration when people can not even be bothered to make small steps. Yesterday I actually made people pull out cans and bottles from their trash at work. I took them home to recycle. I told them - come on now guys at least on Earth day you should make an attempt!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Oh how your poem rings so true with me! It is a constant frustration when people can not even be bothered to make small steps. Yesterday I actually made people pull out cans and bottles from their trash at work. I took them home to recycle. I told them - come on now guys at least on Earth day you should make an attempt!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Mari, thank you so much for your review and for your recycling efforts :-) Brooke
Comment from nancyjam
Strong message in your poem.
I like the metaphor of a mother
one day denying her children when
they test her patience.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Strong message in your poem.
I like the metaphor of a mother
one day denying her children when
they test her patience.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Nancy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Brooke,
a strong metaphorical message to ponder on. Indeed how long before it takes a global abortion to the disrespect shown through greed?
Strong topic and beautifully written, but hey, do I expect any thing less from you?
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
******stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Hi Brooke,
a strong metaphorical message to ponder on. Indeed how long before it takes a global abortion to the disrespect shown through greed?
Strong topic and beautifully written, but hey, do I expect any thing less from you?
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
******stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Jim, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Allison78
This is so very true and well written. Humanity just keeps taking and taking and taking, someday there will be nothing left. I loved the artwork you picked. I wish I could give you a six!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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This is so very true and well written. Humanity just keeps taking and taking and taking, someday there will be nothing left. I loved the artwork you picked. I wish I could give you a six!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Allison, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sure God is sad when He views the mess we have made of the nature and the beauty around us. I enjoyed reading your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I am sure God is sad when He views the mess we have made of the nature and the beauty around us. I enjoyed reading your lovely poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I can't even imagine creating something as wonderful as Earth, entrusting it to humankind as stewards, and then watching them screw it all up so totally. Thanks so much, Barbara :-) Brooke
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
How beautiful in both the writing and the message. So very true and timely. I love the final lines;
when their demands,
once always met,
are one day
marked
declined.
Perfect Brook.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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How beautiful in both the writing and the message. So very true and timely. I love the final lines;
when their demands,
once always met,
are one day
marked
declined.
Perfect Brook.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Cheryl, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem and for your generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke