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Comment from garrymc5
I like it. It skips along at a god pace, and you feel the dog's nerviness, the owner's apprehension and separation. Good ambience also. The language was too difficult for the general reader. It also left me wondering where I was, ie what country. That probably need rectifying.
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I like it. It skips along at a god pace, and you feel the dog's nerviness, the owner's apprehension and separation. Good ambience also. The language was too difficult for the general reader. It also left me wondering where I was, ie what country. That probably need rectifying.
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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I liked the brogue and referred to it in my notes. I thought it might be troublesome, but felt it captured the image faster since I only had 100 words to tell this story and make it interesting. Thank you for reviewing and I do appreciate your advice.