All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Soft Curtains"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Gungalo
Like voyeurs,
we wait for her to reappear
so we can wax poetic
Oh yes girl and she does to. Funny, I've always referred to the moon as being a man. You have taken her to the seductive side.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Like voyeurs,
we wait for her to reappear
so we can wax poetic
Oh yes girl and she does to. Funny, I've always referred to the moon as being a man. You have taken her to the seductive side.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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never - always the feminine ... even in Roman mythology, yes??
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Don't know girl, male to me. Heeh.
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Artemis? Diana? Gungalo? he he he - but you're right, some cultures do a male moon ...
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I know. LOL
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is very well written full of imagery which adds so much to the work I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Yes my friend this is very well written full of imagery which adds so much to the work I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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and again thank you! :)S
Comment from robina1978
This is a great free verse. The picture complements it so well. Lots of alliteration and imaginary. A joy to read and review. Weather changes are on everybody's mind:)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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This is a great free verse. The picture complements it so well. Lots of alliteration and imaginary. A joy to read and review. Weather changes are on everybody's mind:)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Bless you Ine - so glad you liked this little piece - and a special 'thank you' for your lovely six!
HAPPY EASTER!
:)Sharyn
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very welcome and deserved, Ine
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sharyn,
I took Jade out to dinner at Angourie on Thursday night and witnessed this beautiful giant full moon rise as we ate. How can it not mesmerize. You did a spectacular job creating such words to accompany this stunning visual. Like voyeurs!. Time to plant the garlic.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
I took Jade out to dinner at Angourie on Thursday night and witnessed this beautiful giant full moon rise as we ate. How can it not mesmerize. You did a spectacular job creating such words to accompany this stunning visual. Like voyeurs!. Time to plant the garlic.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thx James ... I was driving home the other night ... light rain for several days ... as suddenly there was literally a 'hole' in the sky and the moon appeared - so bright - with sheets of rain & clouds racing across, but for just a moment - totally clear & beautiful ... no garlic needed! :)))S
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
I absolutely love this stanza:
Languid,
the full moon
slowly sweeps back
her blowing curtains of soft grey rain
to peer at us
in vast amusement
Such creative thought. Great artwork choice, or did the art inspire the poem? I love to watch the moon, especially when clouds are flowing rapidly underneath it. One of the things that inspire me. Thoroughly enjoyed this read.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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I absolutely love this stanza:
Languid,
the full moon
slowly sweeps back
her blowing curtains of soft grey rain
to peer at us
in vast amusement
Such creative thought. Great artwork choice, or did the art inspire the poem? I love to watch the moon, especially when clouds are flowing rapidly underneath it. One of the things that inspire me. Thoroughly enjoyed this read.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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actually the art work was the closest I could find to what I saw - I was driving home the other night ... light rain for several days ... as suddenly there was literally a 'hole' in the sky and the moon appeared - so bright - with sheets of rain & clouds racing across, but for just a moment - totally clear & beautiful ... :)))S
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Wow! Wish I could have seen that! MN :0 :))
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh, wow and you caught the moon as a being behind the velvet clouds. You have a way of seeing beyond into the abyss and I hope you understand me because I don't know how to say it any other way.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Oh, wow and you caught the moon as a being behind the velvet clouds. You have a way of seeing beyond into the abyss and I hope you understand me because I don't know how to say it any other way.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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So glad you enjoyed this one too - I really did see it just like this a few nights ago Barb - we'd just had 3 days rain ... and ... there she was ... :)s
Comment from Child of the King
Lovely! I like the words you used to describe the looks of the moon. The last line--" wax poetic" love that too. The moon gets written about more than the sun. Perhaps because it is more romantic? Happy Easter
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Lovely! I like the words you used to describe the looks of the moon. The last line--" wax poetic" love that too. The moon gets written about more than the sun. Perhaps because it is more romantic? Happy Easter
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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To you also my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from MizKat
This is a really beautiufl poem, Sharyn. The moom is so pretty, but is also changeable. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of word art. Kat
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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This is a really beautiufl poem, Sharyn. The moom is so pretty, but is also changeable. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of word art. Kat
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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and again, blessings! :)Sharyn
Comment from fairy77
Loved this Sharyn. Got my computer fix took a while.I just shaved my forests legs. Liked so we can wax poetic! Very smart and amusing:)Loved it:)beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Loved this Sharyn. Got my computer fix took a while.I just shaved my forests legs. Liked so we can wax poetic! Very smart and amusing:)Loved it:)beth fairy77.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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you reminded me to shave my forested legs too, Beth ... so now we're BOTH svelte, smooth & gorgeous, right????
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exactly:)lol Happy Easter friend:)Enjoy the day!and chocolate. beth fairy77 HUGS!
Comment from Walu Feral
Wow! You really are the clever one matey. This one is such a dreamy little piece and is on one of my favorite topics, the night sky. Well done and cheers, Fez.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Wow! You really are the clever one matey. This one is such a dreamy little piece and is on one of my favorite topics, the night sky. Well done and cheers, Fez.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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thx so much Fez! :)))I was driving home the other night ... light rain for several days ... as suddenly there was literally a 'hole' in the sky and the moon appeared - so bright - with sheets of rain & clouds racing across, but for just a moment - totally clear & beautiful ... :)))S