Reviews from

All Those Puzzling Pieces

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Midnight Blue"
What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

39 total reviews 
Comment from Sasha
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You have done a wonderful job conveying the image of a beautiful evening of anticipation of love's embrace. I enjoyed this one very much.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    Thx so much dear! :)S
Comment from G.B. Smith
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi again Sharyn
I love new words and today in this magnificent romance poem I learned "phosphorescence" You wording is superb and allows the reader to see your mind's eye's vision
Bear

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    aaah there you are Glen - lovely! I greet you with a phosphorescent smile! :))))
    big hugs
    Sharyn
Comment from Dawn Munro
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a very lovely free verse, Sharon, and sets a romantic and beautiful scene. The ambiance is one of quiet contentment. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    thx so much Dawn! :)
reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Mar-2013
    You're welcome.
Comment from Jumbo J
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Sharyn,
thought you might have been channeling Wordsworth here and I even spoke it aloud in his voice. Beautiful imagery, but someone shut those bloody animals up, I'm trying to sleep!
Thank you for this free verse, you actually took me on a virtual journey.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    Can you tell I had insomnia last night? :)))) thx James!
Comment from Taffspride
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oh simply divine Sharyn. I wish once again I could give this the rating it deserves.

I has everything a good poem needs, and read aloud it is just right. You have wonderful imagery here, I close my eyes and am transported to our beachside condo.

When I read it aloud it was sooo good, but this line particularly, with it's perfect alliteration sounded oh so beautiful:

across the slim sharp saber of the moon's calm

Thank you for sharing.

Iechyd da

Ann


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    aah, so glad you read it aloud Ann - all my stuff is definitely meant for that treatment! bless you for your lovely review my dear - big hugs, Sharyn
Comment from me_tudor
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very nice! I love reading this. I loved the descriptions of things going on outside. I could almost image the sounds. I loved the picture you chose for this piece. Great Job!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    thx so much me_t!! :)S
Comment from Deniz22
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ah yes, Chocolate breath ... to die for ...remember when it was perfume? I gather we are not talking about newlyweds here?
I suppose the mood is broken if one wants marshmallow in his/her hot chocolate and has to get up and get it? :) Very pretty nevertheless ...

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    now now, you behave yourself! Who are you to criticize?? We now know - OFFICIALLY - that you write the WORST POETRY IN THE WORLD, right???? :)
reply by Deniz22 on 22-Mar-2013
    I knew this review would come back to haunt me. You just can't STAND to be second even if it's second worst! LOL
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    no, no precious, I HAPPILY concede that title to you!!! It will give you a base for your swelled head so you can keep writing your nasty Archie Bunker prose downing the ladies!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    no, no precious, I HAPPILY concede that title to you!!! It will give you a base for your swelled head so you can keep writing your nasty Archie Bunker prose downing the ladies!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a beautiful poem, Sharyn, it! it's so romantic. The lovely imagery in your words take us away from the world and its problems, it is just such lovely poem and a lovely one to read. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    bless you Sandra! goodness - 3 x lovelies in one review!!! Lovely! :)S
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Yes my friend think is very well written and beautiful a true feeling of romance through the poem you expressed your thoughts and feelings well regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    thx jill! :)S
Comment from JM daSilva
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Yeah. This poem took me to a desert beach hotel in the forest. Just me and my love away from it all. thanks for the mind vacation.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
    hey that's what Fridays are for, right???
reply by JM daSilva on 22-Mar-2013
    Exactly. Thanks.